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•••Title of the book- 'Living Life Before I Die' proves the appropriateness of what the author wants to convey. It provides exactly the briefing.
So 10/10 for that.
•••Book Cover-The book cover provides the clear image of the female protagonist of this story. Her whole attire in simple words describing her determination, will and guts.
10/10 for this classy book cover.
•••Description of the story- If we talk about the description of this story, it attracts you to read it further. Mystery lovers definitely can get a rough idea of the story but if you're not the much fan of mystery... This book will not disappoint you because this book is the journey of a female who knows that she is going to die but doesn't loose her will to live.
Mentioning of the Las Vegas is a point which holds and generates curiosity. And when mentioning of "wrong side of law" generates humor.
Again a 9/10.
>>>Prologue-I like that author's way to provide the briefing of story. Although its simple but enough of generating interests and and that's why I was attracted to read it further. I like that author's mentioning about the best and craziest way possible to live your life even you know about the time of your death. Simply in my opinion the author is telling and motivated us to live our lives fullest.
So, 9/10 for this part.
•••Plot-. If we talked about plot, it's a little bit slow but its not a negative point as the author mentioned about updates.. and i like this. You made your own to depict your ideas to live that is "SO WHAT YOU HAVE FEW MONTHS TO LIVE.. IT'S STILL NOT THE END OR LAST DAY TO LIVE" But readers don't judge as the story is ongoing and it may change our views.
I suggest to read this.. you have to be patient as mystery is always like this.
Again 9/10 for this part.
•••Character Development-
As the readers gets the theme of the book from its prologue. But its only the idea. For know actually what is happening how it's started, you have to get in the book. The female lead is strong headed, determined and have strong will power and of course ambitious and it's her journey and her ways to live the last days of her life in best way possible.
I give you a 7/10 for that but it may change with the further development of story.
>>>Story telling- The story starts from the news that female lead got the news that she has couple of months to live and then it changes from crying and sad part to be strong and live the remaining life happy and its ways as these things are common to enjoy the life.
But there are changes in ways of enjoying life ahead in the story like tour.
But what actually is happened in the life of female, you have to wait but wait patiently.
So, 7/10 for this part and when story goes ahead I'm pretty sure with your plot it change further.
>>>Language and Grammar- The language is appropriate. Author used simple and understanding language to make it understandable also to those who don't like mystery/ humor genre. I will appreciate this part and thinking of author as what's the use of using weighted amd flowy English with typical words when they can't generate interests in readers.
So, 10/10 for that.
Grammar-
From the grammatical part- Till the chapter I read, i didn't find any particular grammatical error and mistakes.
For the punctuations- Again for this, i didn't find any mistakes.
Author used direct word and speech to show conversations.
So currently, i will say that i didn't able to find as such mistakes.
So currently I'm giving 9.5/10.
NOW PROS AND CONS-
PROS- • Steady plot. •Unique character • No grammatical error •simple speaking language • Maintenance of continuation in the story •Thriller/mystery romance/ humor
CONS- • no images used
Overall rating- 8/10
I would like to tell the readers of this book, that don't judge this book and give comments and views soon.. Wait patiently, Author Don't disappoint you.
************************************** Honestly speaking you are good in writing. But you can improve your writing style. As this genre is always full of curiosity and this is the point i find somewhere lacking till now.
But don't disappoint on this part because the story is still ongoing and I'm pretty sure that the further story is able to change my and other views because I know 'best is yet to come.'
And I dont think I dont even have the right to review and judge your book as I never tried to try my hands in this genre.
But anyway,I hope I have cleared everything you asked for.
All the best and You'll have my support from now on.❤
