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Description: It gives the reader a subtle idea about the story, and successfully intrigues the brain cells at the same time. Very well written. (9/10)
Plot: The plot was different than the normal werewolf stories one gets in wattpad. Congrats on that. (8/10)
Character development: Loved the way Lyandra has been portrayed. Her character has been penned very beautifully. Characters in the story seem to be very real. (9/10)
Story telling: You are a wonderful writer. The manner in which the story starts gives the reader goosebumps. The fight that you had shown in the 2nd chapter could be very intricately visualised. Couldn't find any major mistakes in the story, the minor ones can be easily rectified during editting. You have an amazing quality of describing things. You chose to show the readers rather than making them read. That's fantastic !! (9/10)
Punctuation: Perfect. (10/10)
Grammar: Language used is simple but standard. No usage of bombastic words is admirable. (9/10)
Graphics: Graphics adds a cinematic effect to the story. But again, your writing did a better job than graphic content could.
Overall assessment: Too big chapters can be tiring at times, but overall this story is very interesting, and more realistic. (9/10)
PROS: >Steady and beautiful plot. >Excellent writing skills. >Perfect grammar. >No unnecessary usage of bombastic vocabulary.
CONS: >Very minor mistakes that can be easily rectified during editing.
To the author,
This was the first ever werewolf story I enjoyed reading. You have done an amazing job. I normally am not into the werewolf genre but The Last Princess seemed to change my mind. Very well done. Love and best wishes.
Thank you.
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I request all to read the book. No matter you like werewolf stories or not. Authors and readers can go through this book for improving their writing skill.
