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Title: It is too big for a title. Trying naming your work in less than three or hardly four words. Moreover, the present title does not seem to evoke interest among readers. (6/10)
Cover: Good one. The editing of the pictures is beautiful. (9/10)
Description: Very efficiently penned. The lines intrigue interest in the reader. It, no doubt, solves the purpose. (9/10)
Plot: The story so far is pretty sweet. The plot is neither very basic nor unique. But the plot is quite good. (8/10)
Character Development: The pace in which the characters are progressing seems healthy. However, the other characters (except the FAB5), I believe, deserve more time. (8/10)
Story telling: Nice. The situations, emotions have been very nicely written. When writing dialogues avoid writing it as a script. Please define the expressions of the speaker. (7/10)
Language and grammar: Language is easy and good. Grammar needs some attention. (8/10)
Punctuation: The author, truly, needs to work on punctuations. Especially usage of capital letters and double inverted commas. Put the dialogues in proper quotation marks. (6/10)
Graphics: Appropriate. (10/10)
Overall assessment: A good story; if given proper attention to the CONS, may reach great heights. An anytime go to book. (8/10)
PROS: >Steady plot >Good graphics. >Nice cover. >Good story telling.
CONS: >Grammar. >Punctuation. >Change the title into something more thematic and small.
To the author,
You are a good writer. Pay more attention to the CONS and read more books. It'll be of great help. I loved and enjoyed your work.
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I would like to recommend this book to all those who love fanfics and sweet love stories.
