Rainbow Reviews.

Random Short Stories

Name of the book : Random Short Stories

Author : Writer10002

Chapters : 2

Genre : General Fiction

Mature : Nope

Let's start the review

My review will be based on the following things

Cover
Plot
Description
Grammar and punctuations.

Cover: My marks for the cover are 7/10
Honestly, I recommend you to use a better cover..as most of the time many readers get attracted to the book seeing it's cover..the cover you use at present is fine but it would really have been good if you used a better one with a better and clear font. The cover is the first thing which convey the emotion of the type of story you write.

Description: I would give 9/10.
It was quite impressive..I can say it was short and sweet. It would be a good thing if you could add some more things related to the storyline like a cliffhanger.

Plot : I would give 9/10
Every chapter is a new story. I would love to say that you are very good at leaving a suspense thriller as an end. I just loved reading that. The first chapter was based on God in human form which we see most of the time in our surroundings..the story starts when the family blindly believes in God in human form and were ready to do anything,which the mata says..this story made an impression on my mind..the use of cliffhanger was  utmost perfect. The second story is based on the unity among people. When monsoon season arrives it rains a lot and how the rain brought the villagers and the students together is what we find on the second story. This story also speaks about the removal of discrimination according to me.. overall the two story plots are really good to read and follow in our day to day life..

Grammar : I would give 8/10
Everyone is not perfect..it's okay mistakes happen. I am happy to say this that there are only some minor errors in grammar,which I request the author to check it while editing.

Punctuation: I would like to give 6/10
Honestly speaking, once just check if there is correct use of full stops, commas, inverted commas, capital letters. I would like to request you to check the punctuation part once again.

Over all total: 39/50

Suggestions I would like to give to improve your writing skills

- Improve good use of vocabulary like instead of using the words which we use in our day to day life, use some good words which attract readers.

- You can also improve your description skills..I totally believe that you can do it still more best than this.

- Don't forget to keep an eye on grammar and punctuation..it distracts many readers when there is some grammatical or spelling error.

The points I would like to appreciate

• I must say this you can describe the emotion of the story perfectly.

• The topic is on Indian  based stories, I appreciate you for taking up this topic. Many of them don't look into it. I also appreciate your point of view.

•  I really hope that this book reaches many more heights as it is truly worth of it.

Here I end the review
I recommend this book to you all guys.
Though it is still in starting stage, I think it will impress you,if you have interest in Indian culture.
Thanks for giving me this opportunity. Hope it helps you.

Reviewed by : pranushka_div_shiv