FEEDBACK

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HELLO! I KNOW THIS IS NOT AN UPDATE BUT I REALLY WANTED SOME FEEDBACK ON THIS STORY.

1. IS IT MOVING TOO FAST? TOO SLOWS?

2. NOT ENOUGH DIALOGUE? IF SO, DO YOU WANT MORE DIALOGUE?

3. DO YOU ENJOY IT?

4. CRITIQUES?

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