Ok guys. So I've been very busy and I promise to update as much as I can but! There is room for improvements. So can you help me with some feedback?
Slower plot? (is it going to fast?)
Too much or too little detail? (add more or less of each?)
Are the chapters too short? (Longer with more descriptions?)
Explain more? (Links to the statement above)
More smut? (I know you liek it 😏)
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Strip for Me (Lashton AU)
Hayran KurguLuke had been kicked out of the house at 17 because his parents don't accept him for being gay. Since then, he has met Dodger. Little does Luke know, he was going to make big money and meet this one 'innocent' boy from next door's lingerie store, As...
