Laws Of Love ✅

Chapter 6

*Raymond's p.o.v*

        It's Friday and I'm out with Vanessa at L'amour hotel. We take the elevator to our room. The room is very cozy and has a lot of rose petals on the floor joined to form welcome. Vanessa runs to the fridge for a drink. Before she takes a sip, I turn her around. She looks straight into my eyes and I give her a peck. She smiles and I walk into the bathroom for a quick shower.

      After having my bath, I walk into the bedroom and spot a glass of wine. I take a sip but the glass comes crashing to the beautifully tiled floor when I look up.

      ''Heavens, Nessa!'', I exclaim. Vanessa is wearing a white langerie with her hair tied in a ponytail. Oh, her lips are covered in red lipstick. She giggles when she catches me staring ridiculously at her. I move closer to her. I move my fingers through her hair.

      ''You're mine'', I whisper in her ear. She looks at me and bites her lip. I push her to the wall and start kissing her passionately. I kiss her neck and begin to undress her. I pick her up and place her on the bed. I begin to remove her bra but she hesitates.

      ''Shit'', she whispers to herself. I stop and look at her.

      ''Are you alright?'', I ask Vanessa.

      ''Yeah''

      ''Then why do you look worried?''

      ''It's just...''

      ''Is it me?''

      ''No, no. It's just that that I'm a, I'm a...''

      ''A virgin?'', I ask and she nods.

      ''It's okay. I'll stop if you're not ready''

      ''No, Ray I'm ready''

      ''Are you sure?'', I ask to be certain.

      ''Yes'', Vanessa reassures me.

I undress and attack her lips. I break from the kiss and look at Vanessa.

      ''Are you sure about this?'', I ask one more time. She nods and I enter her. She moans in pain and pleasure.

      It's midnight and we are both in our birthday suits under the sheets. I still can't believe that Vanessa just lost her virginity to me. I feel her turning around. She wakes up and smiles at me.

      ''Thanks for today'', I say to her.

      ''You're welcome'', she says and goes back to sleep. I wrap my hands around her.

   * * *

      The next day, Vanessa and I go to the pool side. I'm beaming with smiles and Vanessa just can't stop blushing. I fake coughing just to tease her.

      ''Hey!'', she shouts and laughs. She looks so beautiful today. I dive into the pool. I swim for some time and stop to stare at her.

      ''Why are you staring at me?'', she asks.

      ''Who? Me?''

      ''Don't act like a dummy. Yes you''

I move closer to her and place my hands on her shoulder.

      ''That's because you look lovely today''

      ''Thanks Ray''

      ''I love you Nessa''

      ''I love you too Ray...'', she is interrupted by a phone call.

      ''One second'', she says and gets out of the pool to get her phone.

      ''Petra!'', she exclaims. ''I'm gonna put it on loud speaker so you can talk to Raymond''

      ''Hi Ray'',Petra says.

      ''Hey Petra''

      ''I can see you two are having fun'', she says sarcastically.

      ''Look who's talking. Aren't you the one having fun with Caleb?''

     ''True but he has left for work so I have the house all to myself''

      ''Cool''

      ''Guys, there's something you need to know. Jay just got bailed from prison'', Petra informs us.

      ''No!'', Vanessa and I exclaim.

      ''Why?'', Vanessa asks.

      ''Nobody knows why. I'm even surprised'', Petra states.

      ''When was he bailed?'', I ask.

      ''Just this morning'', Petra says.

      ''I hope he doesn't come close to any of us'', I say.

      ''I hope so too'', Petra replies.

      ''Sis, thanks for the info'', Vanessa says.

      ''You're welcome. I have to go''

      ''Okay, bye'', Vanessa says and hangs up.

I see how worried Vanessa is and I take her to the hotel room. I leave to get some security at the reception. I direct the security to our room. I ask the receptionist not to allow Jay in. I show her a picture of Jay then she begins to shiver.

      ''S... sir, I think I let him in a while ago. I'm so sorry''

      ''What?!'', I ask in disbelief.

I try to calm down and run upsatirs. I hear a gunshot and what sounds like Vanessa screaming.

      ''Vanessa!!'', I scream but when I get to the room, she's gone. I look around the room and find a note on the bed.

If you love her, come for her or she'll die in the next five hours. You know where to find us.

      ''Where? Idiot'', I say to myself.

That's when it hit me. Jay used to take Vanessa to a the Dior forest reserve. He has a tree house there. I check out of the hotel and call the police giving them the location of Jay's tree house. In less than fifteen minutes, we arrive at the reserve. The police follows me in their camuflage uniform. The police tracks Vanessa's cell. We follow the signal deep into the forest. The police troupe split into two groups with half following me and the other half going to the other side. When we get to the tree house, I can hear someone mumbling. The mumbling is followed by what sounds like duck tape being peeled off someone's lips. Then I hear a scream, it's Vanessa.

      ''Let me go you psyco'', Vanessa yells at Jay and he slaps her. I can feel my blood boiling.

      ''You are not going anywhere till I say so'', Jay says and climbs down the tree house. Quickly, I climb the ladder to the tree house and untie Vanessa. She kisses me and tries to speak but I stop her. I carry her down the ladder. The police alerts the other half to locate Jay.
We walk back to the entrance of the reserve where an ambulance is waiting for Vanessa. She has so many marks on her neck indicating that he tried to strangle her. I get in the ambulance with her to the hospital.

Our girl's no more a virgin😂. Please don't kill me with the kidnap. Raymond saved her though.
What do you think is really wrong with Jay?

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