Shattering Shadows [MxMxM]

-Authors Note- (Temporary) Help Needed!!

Hi everyone!

I had one of these before, asking for your help. And the time has come that I need it again!

I always read comments though I don't always reply, but it usually gets me reading that part of the chapter. And lately, I've started spotting so many different areas that just make no sense, or don't add up.

I can't say there is plot holes just yet because obviously, the story isn't finished.

I've started making out a list of what edits I have to make, what areas I need to work on, what needs to be removed or developed more. Along with my style of writing from when I started this story.

Here are a few of known situations:

Jameson's personality/description of himself in the beginning, doesn't add up to how he is now.

Summers overly dramatic fall because of a pillow. I mean really?

Jameson's jobs. Which I have never mentioned again since his help with Rodney lol.

Jameson's relationship with Ledger, very vague at the start, as I'd only figured him out as I wrote more.

The insight to Rodneys life, I might touch on it again throughout further chapters, but I made it seem like a big story roll and dropped it. (I've a book planned for him so obviously I don't want to reveal too much)

Revons appearance, I only mentioned briefly in the beginning that he is tanned. Then I further mentioned that his parents were an interracial couple. I've also made out that when he was younger he had a darker tone to his skin but went a lot paler over time, I'm not sure how accurate this is? I've an idea of Revon in my head, but I don't know if I've really put in an effort to get that across.

Jameson's past, I'd mentioned his mother in the first chapter; and never brought up his parents again. I know I touched on his brother, Jayden but never again, the cabin...

Some random ass room in Jameson's house that's full of artefacts??? I don't even know...

No. Not Stefans involvement up until now. I may highlight his moments with Jameson and Revon more, allow you to get to know him more, but we're entering the turning point. Up until now it's been MxM. As you can tell, we are in the process of moving to MxMxM. So he'll start to be a main focus since he wasn't a priority in Jameson's eyes, only Revon was.

Have you any more that comes to mind?

Or is there any other comments/suggestions?

Have you any ideas for future chapters?

Any suggestions for where the story will go?

Any comments would be appreciated!

A reminder: Whole I write each chapter, I learn more about the plot, my characters, and the story as a whole. At the start, I had a plan. Throughout, I tried to stick to a plan. But it was never certain. And I soon realised that as I wrote, things seemed to fall into place much better if I did so without following something, it suits me better.

Although I know Revons past, Jameson's past, Stefans past, that's all I know and stick to. With that, I just write.

This obviously leaves it open for a lot more edits being needed and maybe plot holes, but that's why I want to start recording them so I'll be ready to edit them once I've the story complete.

Anyway, that's all really, I'm currently working on the next chapter and again, I'm excited!
We're finally moving into the MxMxM and it's time to get the ball rolling!!

Lots of love xoxo