The Throne Awards 2020

✨ Stools: Short story Results✨

All participants are requested to take the critique positively. If there is any participant that needs any further help with editing the book or cover we'd be glad to help you find a suitable editor!

Prizes: For the prize, PM this account mentioning your position and the genre you won in!

With that said, thanks to each and every participant. You've all done a great job!

Here are the awaited results!

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👑First 👑

Twisted lines unheard_tales

Cover:4
Blurb:5
Title:5
Description:5
Plot:10
Originality:5
Characters:5
Pace:4.5
Grammar:10
Overall enjoyment:5
Total:58.5

Review: I was NOT expecting a story like this in here. Wow. It pulled the strings of my heart. The harsh reality of war and countries on bad terms so beautifully explained through the innocent actions of kids. The only small complaint I have is the cover. A picture of two kids holding hands with a fence in between would have been more apt. I literally have no issues. Take the first prize. Shoo.

👑Second👑

Fatal Apptraction wanderedwriter

Cover:2
Blurb:5
Title:5
Description:5
Plot:10
Originality:5
Characters:4
Pace:5
Grammar:10
Overall enjoyment:5
Total:56

Review: This is what I was searching for in a short story. It is perfect. I couldn't find any flaws in the story and it has become my favourite short story.😍 The only thing that needs to be changed is the cover. The subtitles aren't visible too. An attractive cover is what the reader sees when they choose books on Wattpad. Once that's changed, it would be perfect!

👑Third👑
(It's a tie!) In no particular order-

Heart Sounds: Tineedsj001

Cover:5
Blurb:3
Title:4
Description:3
Plot:10
Originality:5
Characters:4
Pace:5
Grammar:9
Overall enjoyment:5
Total:53

Review: A very interesting book. I was expecting a book with one story but the author surprised me with a new story in each chapter. Perfect grammar. Beautiful cover. The description was short and sweet but you could give us an idea of what's inside the book. Enjoyed it overall.

And

Choreography of Life: mellimack

Cover:2
Blurb:3
Title:5
Description:3
Plot:10
Originality:5
Characters:5
Pace:5
Grammar:10
Overall enjoyment:5
Total:53

Review: A beautiful story. A small act of kindness can truly make someone's day. I absolutely loved the way you worded the sentences with beautiful metaphors. The only issues I had were the cover and the description. Just a suggestion, but it would be better if you gave a small summary next to the title of each story in your description instead of what's there now. As for the cover, it's vague and the pictures haven't been blended in properly. A new cover is definitely needed. I would've announced this story first, if not for that cover.