✨ Director's Chair: Fanfiction results✨

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All participants are requested to take the critique positively. If there is any participant that needs any further help with editing the book or cover we'd be glad to help you find a suitable editor!

Prizes: For the prize, PM this account mentioning your position and the genre you won in!

With that said, thanks to each and every participant. You've all done a great job!

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It's a tie! In no particular order:


The girl who saw tomorrow:bugsies

Cover:5
Blurb:5
Title:5
Description:5
Plot:9
Originality:4
Characters:5
Pace:4.5
Grammar:9
Overall enjoyment:5
Total:56.5

Review: WHAT A BEAUTIFUL COVER. Perfect pictures, perfect font, everything's so good! It was really interesting to read it! There are minor mistakes here and there, but nothing that can't be corrected. As a fanfiction, one can't exactly deduct points for originality but scenes from the book and movie were reinterpreted. It's not wrong but I couldn't bring myself to give a full score for that. Overall, I enjoyed the book a lot!

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God is my oathasli_niassuh

Cover:3.5
Blurb:5
Title:5
Description:5
Plot:9
Originality:5
Characters:5
Pace:5
Grammar:9
Overall enjoyment:5
Total:56.5

Review: Though I appreciate seeing JK's beautiful visuals in a wonderful edit, the story is about a woman. Shouldn't the cover include a woman's picture then? The font on the cover is great though.

I couldn't help myself, I really wanted to point small stuff out so you make this book the best

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I couldn't help myself, I really wanted to point small stuff out so you make this book the best. Here, it would be better if you wrote the sentence in italics as Ella's point of view because read the sentence again, it's grammatically wrong.

 Here, it would be better if you wrote the sentence in italics as Ella's point of view because read the sentence again, it's grammatically wrong

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