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With that said, thanks to each and every participant. You've all done a great job!
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Follow your judge guys! classykrissi
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After School ridampanesar
Cover - 5/5
Blurb - 5/5
Title - 5/5
Description -5/5
Plot - 10/10
Originality -5/5
P
ace - 5/5
Characters - 5/5
Grammar - 9/10
Overall enjoyment - 5/5
Total: 59/60
This book After School was great. She described well, she gives the readers good work and she deserves 1st place for good work. Keep it up.
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Dark Country SarahSchott
Cover- 5/5
Blurb - 5/5
Title - 5/5
Description - 5/5
Plot - 9/10
Originality - 4/5
Pace - 5/5
Characters: 3/5
Grammar: 9/10
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
Total: 55/60
This book was also amazing, Dark Country. I can see that the writer puts a lot of effort and time in this work. Just a little trimming up and you are good to go. Great work.
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Got Pregnant by the Hybrid Zacari-Primrose
Cover - 5/5
Blurb - 4/5
Title - 4.5/5
Description - 5/5
Plot - 10/10
Originality - 4/5
Pace - 5/5
Characters -5/5
Grammar - 9.5/10
Overall Enjoyment - 5/5
Total: 53/60
I was literally hooked to this book, Got Pregnant by the Hybrid. Good characters, great writing style and the use of words were good. She paints a picture in the reader's mind. Just a little fixing up and she's good to go.
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Here are the reviews for other books:
The Candy Trap Asmita_Mukherjee
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 4/5
Title: 4.5/5
Description: 3/5
Plot: 8/10
Originality: 5/5
Pace: 5/5
Characters: 4/5
Grammar: 8/10
Overall Enjoyment - 5/5
Total: 51.5/60
The cover of The Candy Trap was amazing, and just by looking at it, I can tell that the book was going to be a good one. But work on a few more things, especially your description. Remember your description helps you to get more readers and reads.
Rise of the New Olympians, akeila_agramunn
Cover - 4.5/5
Blurb - 5/5
Title - 5/5
Description - 5/5
Plot - 7/10
Originality - 2/5
Pace - 4/5
Characters - 4.5/5
Grammar - 6/10
Overall Enjoyment - 4/5
Total: 47/60
Rise Of The New Olympians was actually good to read. But there are just a few things to work on. Work on your grammar some more, and the level of Originality and you will be fine but I liked reading it.
Homework, lonely_cheesecake
Cover - 3/5
Blurb - 4/5
Title - 4/5
Description - 4/5
Plot - 6/10
Originality - 5/5
Characters - 4/5
Pace - 4/5
Grammar - 8/10
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
Total: 47/60
Homework, was actually an okay book for me. You just have to work a little bit on your cover. But otherwise, it was okay.
Whoever Murdered Crystal Morrison? ESJ1004
Cover - 4/5
Blurb - 4.5/5
Title - 3.5/5
Description -5/5
Plot: 5/10
Originality - 5/5
Pace - 5/5
Characters - 4/5
Grammar - 6/10
Overall Enjoyment - 4/5
Total: 46/60
This book, Whoever Killed Crystal Morrison was also okay but more work is needed. Work on your grammar some more and Inform you to read other books, watch movies and build some out of the box ideas. But it was also okay.
Whipsplash A City Mermaid's Wet Dream Lupius_Mohnschein
Cover: 3/5
Blurb: 3/5
Title: 4/5
Description: 3/5
Plot: 7/10
Originality: 5/5
Characters: 2/5
Grammar: 9.5/10
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
Pace: 4/5
Total: 45.5/60
Whiplash A City Mermaid's Wet Dream needs a little more work to description and character. Include more characters and more speech. But your grammar level was good. You can improve.
Cover: 3/5
Blurb: 4/5
Title: 4/5
Description: 4/5
Plot: 6/10
Originality: 3/5
Pace: 2/5
Characters: 4/5
Grammar: 4/10
Overall Enjoyment: 3/5
Total: 37/60
Epicinium, needs to improve a little bit more in terms of characters, grammar, cover and a few more. You need to read from top authors, see how they write and you make you very best out of it. But it was okay. Just need to improve.
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