✨ Park Bench: Romance Results✨

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With that said, thanks to each and every participant. You've all done a great job!

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👑 First👑

Sushi & sea lions: RCorsini

cover: 4.5/5
blurb: 3.5/5
title: 3/5
description: 3/5
plot: 8/10
originality: 3.5/5
characters: 4/5
pace: 4/5
Overall enjoyment: 4/5
grammar: 8/10

total: 45.5/60

Review: Sushi & sea lions.
If you remember i was your judge for previous awards (few months ago) I see you have edited the story. I like it. Again this book never fails to impress me. Love the cover and the characters in it. Great work. No matter how many times i read it it doesn’t gets old with is very good thing about your story. Daniela is very strong character and you have developed it too good. I don’t usually read romance and chick lit but i really like your story. Keep it up and there is always a room for betterment and I know you will do great.


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The Ties that Bind, MiniMoxx

cover: 3/5
blurb: 3/5
title: 3/5
pace: 3/5
grammar: 8/10
characters: 3.5/5
description: 3.5/5
plot: 8/10
Overall enjoyment: 3.5/5
originality: 3.5/5

total: 41/60

Review: The ties that bind.
To start with the cover, I like it simple and yet explains the title and gives justice to the story. Ella's character focused on education more than boys which is great, she encourages to be determined towards her career and future first. Beautiful love story between the characters. Simple and decent but at the same time dramatic. I enjoyed it. I think if you give a little rush to your story it will be more fun i found it a little boring in the middle chapters but over all good job. Good luck!

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Until we meet: wanderedwriter

cover: 2.5/5
blurb: 2/5
title: 3/5
pace: 2.5/5
grammar: 8/10
description: 3/5
characters: 3/5
plot: 7/10
Overall enjoyment: 3/5
originality: 3/5

total: 36/60

Review: Until we meet
I really like the concept of a travelling boss. This book felt different than what I usually read in romance. Great! It was original and different but I found myself lost in the 2nd chapter. Try to describe it more and more straight to point. Characters were great. Use a little high Grammar vocabulary to make it more interesting. Good luck!

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Here are the reviews for others:

Fallen angelbehi-bunny03

cover: 1/5
Blurb: 1/5
title: 1.5/5
pace: 2/5
grammar: 6.5/10
characters: 2/5
description: 2.5/5
plot: 6.5/10
Overall enjoyment: 2/5
originality: 2.5/5
total: 21.5/60

Imperfectly perfect: Wuraola23

cover: 2/5
blurb: 2/5
title: 2/5
pace: 2.5/5
grammar: 7/10
characters: 3/5
description: 3/5
plot: 7/10
Overall enjoyment: 3/5
originality: 3/5
total: 34.5/ 60


Secret LoveAmaTwiaa

cover: 1.5/5
blurb: 2/5
title: 2.5/5
pace: 2/5
grammar: 7/10
characters: 3/5
description: 3/5
plot: 6.5/10
Overa enjoyment: 2.5/5
originality: 3/5
total: 33/60


Love potionsdoofinshzmertz5

cover: 3/5
blurb: 2/5
title: 2.5/5
pace: 3/5
grammar: 7/10
characters: 3/5
description: 2.5/5
plot: 6/10
Overall enjoyment: 2/5
originality: 2.5/5
total: 33.5/60


Marrying my oppositekinalhariya

cover: 1/5
blurb: 2/5
title: 1/5
pace: 2/5
grammar: 7/10
characters: 3/5
description: 2.5/5
plot: 7/10
Overall enjoyment: 3/5
originality: 3/5
total: 31.5/60

See me too Emy_Akpan
cover: 3/5
blurb: 3/5
title: 2/5
pace: 2.5/5
grammar: 6.5/10
character: 3/5
description: 2.5/5
plot: 6.5/10
Overall enjoyment: 2.5/5
originality: 3/5
total: 34.5/60

Between the redwoods Sydneycl2050
cover: 2/5
blurb: 3/5
title: 2/5
pace: 3/5
grammar: 7/10
characters: 3/5
description: 2.5/5
plot: 7/10
Overall enjoyment: 2.5/ 5
originality: 3/5
total: 35/60

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