All participants are requested to take the critique positively. If there is any participant that needs any further help with editing the book or cover we'd be glad to help you find a suitable editor!
Prizes: For the prize, PM this account mentioning your position and the genre you won in!
With that said, thanks to each and every participant. You've all done a great job!
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👑 First👑
Neverland OnlineWues_30
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 5/5
Title: 5/5
Description: 5/5
Plot: 10/ 10
Originality: 5/5
Characters: 5/5
Pace: 4/5
Grammar: 8/10
Overall enjoyment: 5/5
Total: 57/60
Review:
This book is awesome! I was not able to resist myself from giving full score. But small mistakes in some sentences made me reduce marks in grammar. Cover is great and it is apt with the title. The blurb is very interesting. The world you have created in this book is so amazing. Sci-fi and fantasy lovers, here is a treat for you. Credits to the writer.
👑 Second 👑
The second prize is bagged by two:
Synworld chronicles Synegg
Cover: 3/5
Blurb: 4/5
Title: 5/5
Description: 5/5
Plot: 10/ 10
Originality: 5/5
Characters: 5/5
Pace: 4/5
Grammar: 9/10
Overall enjoyment: 5/5
Total: 55/60
Review: I am amazed by this writer for creating a whole new world, that too a world beyond reality. Hats off for that. I really loved the storyline and characters of the story. I wished this book would win but the cover lacked the mark set by the creative storyline. This amazing book really needs a wonderful cover, please work on it. Readers who need a different story to travel through, please give this book a chance to take you to a different world. I appreciate the writer for the skills.
And
Detective Exorcist TheSpadeAndAce
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 5/5
Title: 4/5
Description: 5/5
Plot: 9/ 10
Originality: 5/5
Characters: 5/5
Pace: 5/5
Grammar: 7/10
Overall enjoyment: 5/5
Total: 55/60
Review:
Wow! What a book! The cover is excellent and the blurb was creepy and apt for the title.
The storyline is awesome and intriguing. There were teeny tiny grammatical errors, please correct them while you edit. It's a really good book, credits to the writer for your amazing skill in creating such a story.
👑 Third👑
Wings CainisLupis
Cover: 1/5
Blurb: 3/5
Title: 3/5
Description: 5/5
Plot: 10/10
Originality: 5/5
Characters: 5/5
Pace: 4/5
Grammar: 8/10
Overall enjoyment: 5/5
Total: 49/60
This book is great! The plot is unique, well developed and the description of the scenes are so good. The language and words used, take the book to another world. The cover could have been better matching the storyline. Blurb can be a bit more interesting. Overall this book has it's potential to shine if the writer works on the cover and other minute things.
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Here are the reviews for others:
Under 168 hoursMadinah_Writes
Cover: 1/5
Blurb: 4/5
Title: 5/5
Description: 3/5
Plot: 9/ 10
Originality: 5/5
Characters: 5/5
Pace: 4/5
Grammar: 9/10
Overall enjoyment: 3/5
Total: 48/60
I love the originality of this story. It really does bring the visuals of what the writer is mentioning about, even without visiting the place. The cover could have been of better clarity the subtitle is not legible but the concept is great.
The clearingRogueWriter55
Cover: 1/5
Blurb: 2/5
Title: 4/5
Description: 5/5
Plot: 7/ 10
Originality: 4/5
Characters: 5/5
Pace: 3/5
Grammar: 6/10
Overall enjoyment: 3/5
Total: 40/60
The blurb was very detailed and almost says half of the story in it. The plot is very interesting. Characters are splendid and lively. Please check on the grammar and make the story even more better. Cover of the book doesn't show much about the story.
IROBOTDebbywrites01
Cover: 3/5
Blurb: 5/5
Title: 2/5
Description: 2.5/5
Plot: 9/ 10
Originality: 4/5
Characters: 2.5/5
Pace: 2/5
Grammar: 5/10
Overall enjoyment: 2/5
Total: 37/60
Cover could have been better. Blurb is very interesting and kindling curiousity. Grammar needs lot of work. It was very difficult to get the point of view of writer without proper grammar. Do work on it.
The mansion manwhatsmymeme
Cover: 2/5
Blurb: 3/5
Title: 3/5
Description: 3/5
Plot: 5/ 10
Originality: 2/5
Characters: 4/5
Pace: 3/5
Grammar: 7/10
Overall enjoyment: 2/5
Total: 34/60
This book resembles somewhat like the story of "The selfish giant". Cover was simple and just showing the mansion man but speaks of nothing about the other characters not even the main possession of the lead role: Red kids watch. The blurb and chapter 1 are more or less the same. Please make the blurb interesting to attract many readers. The grammar is okay but the flow of story will get better with punctuations.
Esoteric Beacon yaris052018
Cover: 2/5
Blurb: 2/5
Title: 2/5
Description: 4/5
Plot: 6/ 10
Originality: 3/5
Characters: 2/5
Pace: 2/5
Grammar: 6/10
Overall enjoyment: 2/5
Total: 31/60
The storyline was different. The pace of the story can be a tad faster to make the story more interesting. The character names and origin of the story don't link. Please give some originality to the story and use the regional names itself, it can make the story even better. (just a suggestion)
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This user was not found so this book has not been judged: 2938 Odyssey, SumitJena2099
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