✨ Loveseat: Chicklit Results✨

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With that said, thanks to each and every participant. You've all done a great job!

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AgentRomanoff12

👑 First👑

Dirty Women, wildress

Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 4.5/5
Title: 5/5
Description: 4.5/5
Plot: 9/ 10
Originality: 5/5
Characters: 5/5
Pace: 5/5
Grammar: 9/10
Overall enjoyment: 5/5

Total: 57/60

Review: Intense, immersive and impressive. This story is one of a kind, amazingly illustrated story of three different women who are broken and fixed in their own way. The title and cover both are intruging and the initial chapters are how they should be. Catchy! They made me want to finish reading the story in one go. Love how the protaganists are weaved in their own way and the mature theme makes it more outstanding than the others. Brilliant.


👑 Second 👑

Exiled to Kootenai, sticklady2015


Cover: 3/5
Blurb: 5/5

Title: 4/5
Description: 5/5
Plot: 9/ 10
Originality: 5/5
Characters: 5/5
Pace: 4.5/5
Grammar: 9/10
Overall enjoyment:.4.5/5

Total: 54/60

Review: Underrated piece of work. Cover needs a bit help, but other than that, I loved this story a lot. Interesting and amazing.


👑 Third👑

Diary of the silent nerd, akeila_agramunn

Cover: 3/5
Blurb: 4/5
Title: 4/5
Description: 4/5
Plot: 7/ 10
Originality: 2.5/5
Characters: 4/5
Pace: 4/5
Grammar: 8/10
Overall enjoyment: 3/5

Total: 43.5/60

Review: Well written, a bit cliché but love the insight to the characters

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Here are the reviews for others:

Blending in, ALICE_1616

Cover: 3/5
Blurb: 4/5
Title: 4/5
Description: 4/5
Plot: 6/ 10
Originality: 4/5
Characters: 3/5
Pace: 3/5
Grammar: 7/10
Overall enjoyment: 3/5

Total: 41/60

Review: The description was very interesting but the story doesn't capture that essence.

Little Savage Robin classykrissi

Cover: 4/5
Blurb: 3/5
Title: 4/5
Description: 3/5
Plot: 7/ 10
Originality: 3.5/5
Characters: 3/5
Pace: 3/5
Grammar: 7/10
Overall enjoyment: 3/5

Total: 40.5/60

Review: Description is interesting and story is well written

THORNDEROUS, incen_dia

Cover: 3.5/5
Blurb: 3/5
Title: 4/5
Description: 3/5
Plot: 6/ 10
Originality: 3.5/5
Characters: 3/5
Pace: 3/5
Grammar: 7/10
Overall enjoyment: 3/5

Total: 39/60

Review: Bold Female Lead- Check. The TV sitcome references were a good touch but character depth required.

The nerd has a b*&er ,cloudyhxrizon

Cover: 3/5
Blurb: 3/5
Title: 4/5
Description: 4/5
Plot: 6/ 10
Originality: 3/5
Characters: 3/5
Pace: 3/5
Grammar: 6/10
Overall enjoyment: 3.5/5

Total: 38.5/60

Review: Decent enough. I laughed when I read the title and the scene. Grammar needs a bit more help.

A peek into the past, Monica_Ahuja

Cover: 3.5/5
Blurb: 2,5/5
Title: 4/5
Description: 2.5/5
Plot: 6/ 10
Originality: 3/5
Characters: 3/5
Pace: 3/5
Grammar: 4.5/10
Overall enjoyment: 2/5

Total: 34/60

Review: Title is apt. Description needs to be catchy and interesting. Love the supernatural aspect but character depth is required.

Damaged Goods, djgraves01

Cover: 3/5
Blurb: 4/5
Title: 3.5/5
Description: 3/5
Plot: 6/ 10
Originality: 3/5
Characters: 3/5
Pace: 2.5/5
Grammar: 5/10
Overall enjoyment: 1/5

Total: 34/60

Review: Grammar needs practice and characters lack depth. Title fits well.

Enzymatic Love, mythicalrealist

Cover: 3/5
Blurb: 3/5
Title: 3.5/5
Description: 3/5
Plot: 7/ 10
Originality: 3.5/5
Characters: 3/5
Pace: 3/5
Grammar: 4/10
Overall enjoyment: 1/5

Total: 34/60

Review: The detailed information about Bio-tech is something new and unique. But care has to be taken to frame the sentences and not breaking the paragraphs into different scenes constantly. Grammar needs to be improved

Self -Love, FoodFreshy

Cover: 3/5
Blurb: 2.5/5
Title: 3/5
Description: 2.5/5
Plot: 6/ 10
Originality: 2/5
Characters: 2/5
Pace: 3/5
Grammar: 7/10
Overall enjoyment: 3/5

Total: 34/60

Review: Seems like another teen fiction, hence care has to be taken to stand this one out. The basic idea of self-love is daunting and nice.

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