Creepypasta OC Reviews (DISCONTINUED!)

Review 6- Cannibal Cassie

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Full Name: Casey Bates Wilson

Cool name.

Media Name: Cannibal Casey (I use the term media since she is a stand alone horror oc)

Understandable. Also, love the alliteration.

Gender: Female

Pronouns: She/Her

Species: Human

Nothing wrong here.

Nationality: Norwegian and American (Her parents were both born in America but their parents are of Norwegian decent)

Pretty original.

Age: 19

Good age.

Sexuality: Bisexual

Same.

Appearance: Casey has peach blonde hair and greyish blue eyes. Her hair is often seen in a loose ponytail. She wears a black and grey ruffled shirt and grey jeans. She also wears a belt and black and grey knee high boots. She also wears a black ribbon choker for aesthetic

I like the outfit, and how realistic it is.

Zodiac: Cancer

Okay.

Weight: Just above average. She is extremely healthy

That's good.

Height: Just above the average height for a female

Okay.

Body Type: Hourglass

A bit cliche, but considering she's seductive and murderous, it makes sense.

Backstory: Casey grew up in a wealthy household but wasn't born with the right mentality. Because of this she developed a craving for human flesh without realizing its unacceptable in society to consume your own species. Because of this she went to a mental hospital but they could never understand why her mentality wasn't right. So they filled her up with drugs. To keep a long story short, she ended up escaping and now lives in an apartment in Illinois

1) Shouldn't her parents point out that it's wrong?

2) Why is she unstable? I think you should work on that a bit more.

3) I'm pretty sure the doctors wouldn't release her back to society once they realized she was unstable.

4) I like the idea of her being a cannibal. I don't see many of those.

5) I like the detail of the setting.

Personality: Crazy, flirty, aggressive, mean, narcissistic, crafty, and lazy

This matches up with the story.

Mental Disorder: Maybe Psychotic

And she's cannibalistic.

Research?: I've only done a little so I can't confirm this is her disorder

It might help to research it.

How They Kill: Casey will usually go to a bar or club and hook up with either a man or woman. After she's done doing what she pleases, she will drug her victim and tie them to a chair. Then she will brutally dismember and consume her victims body parts

I like the originality of this.

Why They Kill: She's mentally unstable and has no reason

This makes sense considering her backstory.

Weaknesses: Casey isn't immortal so she could easily be stopped if people tried hard enough

It might help to get specific on this.

Abilities: Quick speed and stealth

That's very good strengths to have for the characters.

Weapon Of Choice: Meat Cleavers. They cut through bone effectively and are extremely messy. She aquired this weapon from a victim after she escaped a mental hospital

Oh, she escaped the mental hospital. That makes more sense. Also, love the weapon choice.

Fears: Death. She will never admit it and will do anything in her power to not die

Very rational fear.

Description Of Her Relationships: Casey is not committed to anyone but if she was the relationship would be toxic. She would constantly cheat and blame her problems on her partner. It is more than likely that she would be an abuser

Very good reasoning.

Personal Feelings On My Character: I really love this character and is my favorite oc

That's good!

Final thoughts:

-I honestly feel she's a bit bland and unmemorable, but she's still a very good character.

-I really like the design and weapon choice.

-I think it might help to work on her for a bit.

5/10