Original name: Callie Kennedy
Nicknames: Cal, Kenny
I like it a lot.
Creepypasta name: Shadow rabbit (When killing she wears all black, including a black bunny mask, so all people ever see is a silhouette with rabbit ears)
Cool name!
Gender: Female
Pronouns: She/her
Species: Human
Nothing wrong here.
Nationality: English (From England)
Okay.
Age: 17
Alright. Good age.
Appearance: Shoulder length, messy ginger hair, somewhat tanned skin, dark green eyes, freckles. When killing she wears a black turtle neck jumper with black jeans and combat boots along with a black bunny mask. She wears the mask so as no one can see her face and identify her, which allows for her to live a normal life the rest of the time, as people don't know it's her who's killing.
Love the detail. Also, good design. She reminds me of Judy from Dangerous Fellows for some reason.
This is Judy btw:
Anyways, sorry for going off topic.
Zodiac: Gemini
Okay.
Height: Around 5"11
Average, but not too short.
Weight: Pretty average for her age
Alright.
Body type: Inverted triangle (If you don't know it google it)
Okay.
Backstory: She grew up with her parents and lived a pretty happy childhood. She grew up in a London suburb where everyone in the neighborhood seemed to know each other. However when she was 13 her parents were cornered by a group of men who tried to rob them. Her parents convinced the men to let them go as long as they gave the men a monthly payment to keep them away. Her parents could keep up the payment for about 4 years, but eventually were unable to do so. The men came to the house and killed them. Callie witnessed the murder but wasn't caught, and the men didn't even know of her existence. Callie did some research and discovered that the men were part of a gang of over 20 people. Now she hunts down the members of the gang and kills them and will keep going until they are all gone.
I actually really like the backstory, and I honestly have no problem with it! I love how she technically doesn't have any bad intentions.
Personality: She is sarcastic but friendly to everyone (Apart from the gang who caused her parents death), she is willing to help anyone in need and has a soft spot for children, and if she sees a child in need will help them. However, when she is facing a member of the gang that caused her parents death she will become hostile and will become cold and angry, unless it's at night then she will murder them consumed by an uncontrollable fit of rage.
Great personality! I honestly love the detail a lot!
How they kill: She will break into a person's house, sneak into their room and pummel them with a baseball bat while they're asleep.
Nice.
Why they kill: To get revenge on the people who killed her parents.
Understandable.
Weaknesses: She won't kill the person if they have a child because she doesn't want to be the reason another child loses a parent, so I guess her weakness is people with children.
Understandable, considering she dealt with the same thing.
Abilities: She's good at planning, and she is good at sneaking around unnoticed
So, she has good planning and stealth. Good strengths!
Weapons: Baseball bat
Nice weapon.
Fears: Thunder (the sound of it reminds her of the gun shots she heard on the night her parents were killed)
I think they're more you can add here, such as failure of not getting her revenge.
Do like my OC? Kinda, I feel like there's a lot I can improve on.
It's good that you like them! I like them too.
Final thoughts:
-I love the character's design and backstory!
-The detail and realistic intent is great!
-I can't find anything wrong with this.
10/10!
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