Review 12- El Paso's Diablo

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OC by ANTICHRIST-TEETH

Bold=My thoughts

*Curse warning- The OC's form has some curse words that may be offensive to some.*


Original name: Xavier James Wormwood

Very creative name.

Nicknames: He prefers to go by James than anything else. Other nicknames include, XJ, Jay, and Worm.

Alright. Good nicknames.

Creepypasta name: El Paso's Diablo/El Paso's Devil

Oh, that is a name.... I love it.

Gender: Intersex male

Pronouns: He/Him, It/Its, They/Them

Alright.

Nationality: It was born in Puerto Rico and moved to the U.S in its teens. He has Puerto Rican and American citizenship.

Nice, very original and specific.

Age: 44

Okay, that fits the backstory.

Sexuality: Gay

Noice.

Appearance: James has a small scar that connects from his upper lip to his nose. This is from his fathers abuse. He has a narrow face with a strong jawline and a beard that only enhances it. He has long, ashy grey hair that reaches past his shoulders. He has cyan colored eyes and a hooked nose. He usually wears suits whenever he's going out for usual errands. He thinks very highly of himself and this just enunciates that. I'm not gonna lie and say he looks friendly. He's a very intimidating man, especially when he's in his killing outfit. In his killing outfit he wears a hospital mask and completely white clothing with a white apron. The only thing not intimidating about this motherfucker is that he wears glasses and has asthma.

Love the detail! I love when I'm given lots of details that makes it much easier to think of a person, while it is very difficult to describe faces for me. Also, honestly, if I saw this guy in public, I would walk the other way and pretend I didn't see him, which is kinda the point.

Zodiac: Aquarius

Alright.

Weight: They're overweight, but most of it comes from the fact that they have a lot of muscle. They still have fat on their body, most noticeably on their thighs and stomach.

Alright, that could work as a weakness or strength at times.

Height: 6'2

Oh, geez, and he's tall... That is terrifying.

Body type: a mix of muscular and curvy

Alright.

Backstory: James was born in 1974. He was and still is part of a triplet set. He was the last one to be born. Since the doctors who were there were dumbasses, they didn't perform a c-section on his biological mom and she bled out. Him and his triplets, Jesse and Jason, were adopted by their biological uncle and his wife. From then on their uncle would be known as their dad. James would inevitably find out he's intersex after beginning puberty and realize he likes his male attributes instead of his female ones. This lead him to come out to his dad. This was one of the worst things he could've done, because after this the abuse started. His scar comes from his father whipping him with the hooked side of the belt and ripping off a chunk of his skin. James had recently switched schools and became stealth. Everyone knew him as James, and not what his parents had named him. Even his triplets went as far as forging his legal documents to get him to be addressed correctly.
A bully named Michael never liked James for his own reasons, and had a shitty life of his own. Michael could never get a rise out of James (mostly because at this point James was unaffected by anything), so Michael decided to kill James! That would get a rise out of him, right? That's exactly right! James died, came back to life by the power of Lucifer, and was fucking PISSED. He then beat the shit out of Micheal despite having 13 stab wounds to the stomach. Jason and Jesse decided to go look for James because he was taking long. Jason found James and pulled him off of Michael, while Jesse freaked out. Jesse saw the knife on the ground, and stabbed Michael in the throat. Jesse was sent to prison, Jason was sent to a boarding school so James could be the only child left in the house, and James was sent to a mental institution. He was 17 at the time. James was visited by Lucifer, who basically told him that he was The Antichrist and would eventually one day end the world. James is a procrastinator, so yes, he did procrastinate ending the world. He was supposed to end it in 1990, but now his world's date is 2018 so.

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