Why am I doing this? No idea other than I'm bored.
Should I be doing this? Probably not.
Am I doing it? YES.
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This book is brought to you by Derp Steven.
Why Derp Steven? No clue.
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There will be a form in the first chapter. Also, I will be b...
Appearance- Blue hair, Brown eyes, A choker with a cross, some fish nets on her hands with signs on her hands, hand bag with all her books and papers.
I've said this before, but if you unnatural hair, it might be better to have the unnatural color be streaks or fade from a natural color to that unnatural color. I love the rest of the design.
Zodiac- Libra
Height- 5'6"
Weight- 130 lbs
Body type- Skinny.
Nothing wrong here.
Backstory- I'll tag
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I really like the backstory!
Mental disorder- It is a disorder called 'The Rose disorder'
Cool!
Did I research the Disorder- No, it is a disorder that I'm working on for characters like this.
Alright.
How they Kill- Chris likes to walk around the streets, her being missing will lead people to follow her and see if they could find out where is she at, then murder them with her bat.
But why?
Weakness- Seeing something that she saw in her past, and letting her boss down.
Who's her boss?
Abilities- Stealthy and she could be Fast.
That's a good strength.
Weapon- A baseball bat.
Good weapon choice.
Fears- Being judged, Being in a room with one to many people, one day someone will catch her.
Okay, I like the reasoning.
Significant other- No one
Okay.
Do I like my OC- It could use a little work but yes I like it so far.
I like it too, but I agree.
Final thoughts:
-I feel like it could use some work, but I'm sure you can fix it.
-I loved the backstory, but I'm not one for the way they kill and stuff.
