The start.

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It all startet with my and my best friend
alice. We was runing aut when we startet to heat shut gun

"We shuld go Emily" she said
My  stupid ass didnt lisent so i startet to run to the place we heard the gun shot  then i turned araund to see alice running beside my.  I think we was near there.

Then we see one of the car to Duntless
Then we heard somone breath behind us She looked my in the eyse and i turned my head to see two menn standing there with guns at us

"Sit down or i will shot you" one of the menn say. I was trying to get my gun but its was gone we sat down and saw the boss of duntless and you could tell that he was angry.

"What do we have her" he said
" they where looking at us" the other mann say
Then i hear alice voice say
" we was just runing araund then we heard gun shot so we wantet to check it aut to see if somone needed help"

"did i ask" the boss say
"Did i care" i say under my Breathe but he heard that
" what did you say" i look up at him
" what i didnt say anything"
He start to take his gun aut and i was ready to die i closed my eyse and boom i heard a gun shot but i didnt fill any pain.

I open my eyse to see the tree menn walking away and alice on the graund with blood on her head.
" Alice wake up.. alice plis dont leave my... i am sorry... dont close your eyse!!!
STAY WITH MY alice.... stay...with..my.
I say as i am crying.

"I love you emily remember that okay"
She say before leaving my.
I huged her body but it didnt feel the same.

I was walking home with blood on my hand. My mom saw my and runned up to my and hugged my
" what happen sweety"
" they killed her she is dead becuse of my its all my fault i am so sorry"
" its not you fault sweety its not"
"It is its my faul

It was so hard to make this.
We had 400 word new recode for my
book. I know its not good i am not a wrigther and if you see my page i dont always finish my books but this one i am into it.

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