Blood War Slave - CH 3: Janus and a massacre (+answer to comments)

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Thanks to all of you who commented, voted, fanned or just read! I am grateful and happy you liked the content of my story!

For the jumble with the tenses - I apologize and will try my best to avoid it in the future. And I will try to correct what I have written so far.

The same for typos and spelling.

Concerning open questions and confusing scenes, that might not seem to fit in - like the shower- I promise they were intentionally and have a meaning! You will see when you read on. It is a complicated story.

That leads me to the Prologue: it was horrible! You were right about that. I wrote a new one and hope it is more catching than the last one. Maybe you want to reread it? It is before ch 1 again, but totally new and action packed.

I hope you are patient with me as I am pretty busy with work and as exhausted as my characters! For Real !  Anyway, my chapters are a lot longer than usual on wattpad, so I guess you can forgive me.

The next Chapters(4) will have lots of Info and a little first insight on alien/kidnapper perspective. Snd some new characters might come or go.

Now I stop stealing your time and thank you for reading on. Next chapters (after 4 b) will have a little fun, action, tragedy and a little rough romance, as well as questions of common sense, good behavior and respect.

Hope to bring you joy soon.

NExt Chapters r up! Chapter 4a + 4b!!!!

Love,

Angelfox

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Thanks for reading! and fanning and etc. I love you guys!

Here is the next Chapter. It is a little depressing, but action packed. If you do not want to read the cruel violent parts leave them out and you can still follow the plot. I needed this chapter with first sparks of hope in bad and even worse times to start the story, and the story still need some more chapters to really introduce the main plotline and main characters. It is going to be a long story/novel... so take your time and enjoy the slow progress. But: this chappy has lots of information and the next chappy will have action but be less depressing and somehow about heir past.

I hope you enjoy. And I beg you: PLEASE!!! Comment!

Note: The Character of angelika is, except for the name, a real person who gave me permission to use her character and story of life for this. Yeah she really exists and is the way I describe her, and she will be a lot more complicated deep and twisted in the devlopment of this story!

Hav fun!

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Chapter 3: Janus and a massacre

“Puh, wait… I …need… a brake.”

“Janus come on! We gotta move on!”

“No, Alyssa… I… am …TIRED!... I can’t….Mercy…I am … an old man!” Janus said panting heavily.

“I stand guard and you recover, but be fast we do not have time for rest.” Angi said well aware that he was not exhausted because of his age. She did not know what was going on, but his stamina decreased from day to day. Angi suspected it had something to do with those mystical turbulences he talked of, but he refused to tell her what happened.

Together they managed to hide it from the guards to avoid separation. Alyssa and Angi had improved their stamina a lot. They were faster and stronger than before those torturous trainings. And they all wondered why they were forced to train so hard. But they were all too tired to give it much of a thought.

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