Chapter Five: Axel

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I'm woken up by my friend phobe shaking me

"Phobe what the hell do you want?" I asked her as I roll(ed, there's two different tenses in the once sentence, I'd say just for flow pick one and stick with it:))out of bed

"Axel you gotta get up, the cabin is on fire."

"The fire nation," she said to me in a panic as she is grabbing (same thing with the tenses, said and grabbing) our stuff

Then as soon as she wakes me the smell of smoke hits me and I'm jumping out of bed, throwing clothes on and running out.

As I run out I see three cabins on fire and I look over too see the fire nation standing right there, laughing.

"What in the hell was that for?" I ask as i'm walking towards them, ready to start a fight.

"Someone from our cabin has gone and we know it was you guys," they say.

"You think we took your little fire friend? you're crazy!/," as I'm punching one of them. I can hear Phobe running out and calling my name but Icompletely ignore her.

"Axel bring your ass back over here. Have you lost your mind?" she says as she is running at me.

I feel her grab me and pull me off of the dude, as I look down my hands are covered in blood, and his face is a mess.

From the distance I can hear the officer running towards us.

Phobe then grabs me and we take off running

As we get to the courtyard, there is another explosion.

I duck, and then when I get back up Phobe iss gone. I look over and straight ahead there is this huge fire ring. And I can kinda make out the people in it. As soon as I realise(sorry idk if America spells recognise with a z or not oops) who was in it, the kid making the ring collapsed.

I run over and shapeshiftinto the thing I thought I would never do, a person from the fire nation. As I shapeshiftinto him I mimick his powers,but only for a small moment of time.as I mimickhis power I make the ring of fire. I hear Harris call out my name.

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