The Immortal Time-Man

I wrote this all to be on a comic book and so there might be a lack of details. So let me know if there's anything to need be fixed or there's any misspells or in Corrections to let me know. Also let me know how the story goes if you like it or you just like it. So don't be afraid to let me know. There will be more. I'm writing as we are doing this.

This is about a man name Scott-El Roth. He is a Demon/Mutant/Alien. He went by Scott Maddrox. So he can be his own man. But the fate the world is at his hand. He has the Power of Time/Demonic Ability/Stealing Mimic Ability.