DeBeeQueen

Thanks for voting too! Hey, I need a favor. The poem is my first work so I don't expect it to just blow, but give me an honest feed back on the poem you read. What do you think is lacking in it? You've been on Wattpad longer than I have been. What kind of poems do people like? Thanks again, you're awesome!!

CallMeFabulous_

You're welkome ! Well, it's pretty original and outstanding, I like it. Maybe add some rhymes, and a music that  matches the poem, the reading could be even more pleasing, but it's your choice, you're the writer of your own work, but it's still good, keep going ! ;)
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