love, I apologize for any bad criticism you've gone through on behalf of all of your readers. your writing style doesn't need dramatic changes, it's perfectly okay the way it is. grammar errors are common, so I hope you don't feel belittled by such virtual cruelty. just know that whatever happens, I'll support you as you and nothing but you. you and I may not know of each other, as we are merely strangers, but I care for you. I love you, sweetheart. keep your chin up. moos