fantasyauthorbjc
Hiya! I saw your deleted comments asking if you could criticize my book, do you still want to do that? As long as it isn't too mean (I admit that I am a little sensitive sometimes) and is constructive, I'd be happy to see what you come up with! But if you deleted those comments for a reason, that's okay too.
FlairRebelStarling
Yeah I would, but it's for a few petty things that won't really make much of a difference, plus I am quite harsh each time I criticise someone, so that's actually why I deleted my comment. And I would also like to ask... Did you come up with the 'sprites being name after what they like/their hobbies' thing just so no one would ask 'Who in their right mind would name their child Ribonnie?'
