( Prologue & chapter two has been updated)

The story i have published, are still a work in progress, and are more of an 'idea'  than an actual finished story at the moment. Meaning that I in time I intend to rewrite some of it, deffinitly make it longer, more detailed, and add more depth to it. One could call it a "prototype" of a story, so I am aware that it has flaws, and are currently far from what I want it to be. But please feel free to give feedback if you deciede to read it.