Killprince

@AbyssalOne Man...you're just like you sister. She said literally, the exact same thing but in via pm's a couple months ago O.O

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@ShoGunslinger Well, I glanced at your story a bit. Seems like a zombie story. There's a couple spots where I'd break it up into more paragraphs from what I remember, and there are sentences that don't flow nicely from the way they are written. Like, some sentences could be joined together and they would flow nicer. I forget which ones.
          
          Anywho, besides that, your story looks alright! It's got a good start to it. I'd just watch your spelling and how you phrase things.If you want, as you write I could edit it a bit for you when I have time by just saying what I'd fix in the comments on your story per chapter. If you have any further questions or want advice or whatever, feel free to message me! ^_^

Do you have any advice for me for Teeth?

@lilcamae No comment....I'm just going to do the safe thing and ignore that C.C :P

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^-^ Thanks! I could add how Annie got into the alley in the description if you want. :P

@FLYWolf Hey Kelly. Just checked out your story.I read all the way up to the end of chapter 5. You've got a great start there, and I'd say that your writing is pretty good for one who is only 12. However, I suggest you add a bit more descriptiveness to your story. Also, does it say somewhere in the story how she got in the alley in the first place? If not, that would probably be great to add.
          
          And sure. We can be friends. =) I could tell you more bands I listen to if you want. And ah! Your new to the site? Well, let me be the first to say "Welcome to Wattpad!" ^_^

Holy, I just read your info up therre and you like FIR? +) I like it too, but I'm more of a Hollywood undead person. Hi, You can call me Kelly or my nick. Fly.(lol long story +)) Could we be friends?? Also, cliuld you check out my Sstory??
          

Thank you for fanning me :D