Hi sweetheart, I'm just here to give you some feedback, please don't take it the wrong way, but these last three chapters felt different, like they were part of a different story. What I mean is that in the first 15 chapters, there was a more mature narrative and the characters had better development. They went from being 7 committed men taking care of one of their romantic interests to a bunch of silly kids playing cops, and that makes the story lose its magic. The Yoon from the previous chapters is very different from the Yoon in these last 3 chapters. I mean, they're stars, with power and money. The last thing they'd do, no matter how shocked they are, is take charge of the girl's security themselves. They'd talk to their security team, leave the job to the experts, amd try to be an emotional support for her. Your story is really good, and I think you have a lot of talent for writing, but I think you should keep the style of the first 15 chapters. Anyway, this is just my opinion, no offense intended, I just wanted to share my point of view.
