To this one commenter whom I already muted, and completely forgot automatically removes their spam comments in my story:
This is the last time I'll reply to your comments, but how are you complaining about realism in a story where the rule of cool is taken first and foremost, as well as this being a fictional story not meant to be realistic? We're talking about a 15-year-old kid who can swing a scythe larger than her, and the mention of her crafting her weapon that prompted you to complain about how it's unrealistic and needs a team of student huntsmen just to craft Crescent Rose?
While I am open to constructive criticism, all you have done was enforce your own headcanons, complain about the inaccuracies of my story compared to the main show when I specifically noted this also being a rewrite to RWBY's story, complaining about realism in a fictitious world, and setting up a strawman argument just to justify your argument on Joan not being a hero by using the Nuremberg trials. Or that weird one about Jaune's family being cursed to always be the side character because Julius Ceasar stuff?
Word of advice, write your own story, don't enforce your own laws against others. Proper criticism about a story is questioning why a particular part of a story does not work in the rules the author has already established like:
"Humans cannot breathe in space, so why is MC fighting a battle in space?" It is established that humans cannot breathe in space, hence why the question is a valid criticism.
