MrWordsmith

@DeltaTangoEthan I know what you mean. Advanced summer school isn't as easy as it seems.

DeltaTangoEthan

Anything in mind that I should take into consideration for future chapters of Under the Gratavich Chain?

MrWordsmith

Great pacing, great plot, what I'd say is to write a bunch of chapters, than publish 1 each week to engage readers more and to have your book rate higher.
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SacredSheet

Hey. I read your bio. Would you care to critique my story out?

MrWordsmith

@ScarredSheet Yep.
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SacredSheet

Well Arthus was formed from the word Arthur, with a twist. The plot is still unraveling and things will be explained soon. I'm sorry if it was still a bit vague. That's why you continue reading right? to uncover the whole story :D Thanks
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MrWordsmith

 It seems to be a promising story, but the plot seems a bit thin. Slaughtering an entire village of people to get rid of Merlins, but leaving one alive? Not describing the villagers that well or the setting that much. Possible copyright infringement of World of Warcraft of the name Arthus, among other names. Not explaining how the magic system worked clearly made the story a great concept, but made it seem a bit scattered.
            That's my two sense. If you want me elaborate on anything, just ask.
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MrWordsmith

@DeltaTangoEthan agreed
          Btw is it possible to get a date for when Assault is updated?

DeltaTangoEthan

@MrWordsmith with AP testing, cumulatives, and the SAT, I don't see it coming soon :(
            
            I'm pretty bummed because i was going so well until this school year started
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