DeltaTangoEthan
(oh and was I not a follower? that is to change!)
MrWordsmith
DeltaTangoEthan
Anything in mind that I should take into consideration for future chapters of Under the Gratavich Chain?
MrWordsmith
Great pacing, great plot, what I'd say is to write a bunch of chapters, than publish 1 each week to engage readers more and to have your book rate higher.
SacredSheet
wordsmith, sir. Thank you for the positive feedback!
SacredSheet
Hey. I read your bio. Would you care to critique my story out?
SacredSheet
Well Arthus was formed from the word Arthur, with a twist. The plot is still unraveling and things will be explained soon. I'm sorry if it was still a bit vague. That's why you continue reading right? to uncover the whole story :D Thanks
MrWordsmith
It seems to be a promising story, but the plot seems a bit thin. Slaughtering an entire village of people to get rid of Merlins, but leaving one alive? Not describing the villagers that well or the setting that much. Possible copyright infringement of World of Warcraft of the name Arthus, among other names. Not explaining how the magic system worked clearly made the story a great concept, but made it seem a bit scattered.
That's my two sense. If you want me elaborate on anything, just ask.
MrWordsmith
@DeltaTangoEthan I know what you mean. Advanced summer school isn't as easy as it seems.
MrWordsmith
@DeltaTangoEthan Welcome back to Wattpad
MrWordsmith
@DeltaTangoEthan I don't think that there is
MrWordsmith
@yeti14 Fight for the future is good, haven't like the others that much, but it's your call, not mine.
MrWordsmith
@DeltaTangoEthan agreed Btw is it possible to get a date for when Assault is updated?
DeltaTangoEthan
@MrWordsmith with AP testing, cumulatives, and the SAT, I don't see it coming soon :( I'm pretty bummed because i was going so well until this school year started
MrWordsmith
@Wryden Thanks man. I like your name to. How did you come up with your name?