g0th1ka

hi! my friend recently just made a wilbur soot story and it would be radical if you could go give it some feedback and tell me what you think so far .
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/267100398?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=g0th1ka&wp_originator=Gf515%2Bgw10MDBs4plWjlpkuK8nTiipG0G3Evb3BySKaRXgtNOKtJFRV44XHy4Yo9Z7gEDiRUnM6iMqxP5Sa8zB7p9KV4BiCpzGzIydNAQFKGz%2F7DDD6jfYADNYpHb8Fe