R4SP_B3RRY

I. Have. So. Many. Ocs. It’s. Concerning.

3uphori42

Girl… ME TOOO
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giyuu_228

Hello! (✿◠‿◠)
          I hope you’re doing wonderful! ꒰⑅•ᴗ•⑅꒱
          
          Could you please take a look at the new chapters (5, 6, 7, 8, and 9) and let me know your thoughts on them? I'd love to hear your feedback!
          
          As for Akari’s PNG, are you available to create it, or do you have other things keeping you busy right now? If you're ready and able to make the PNG, just let me know! It’s perfectly fine if it takes some time—I can wait!  Just let me know when you think you’ll be able to complete the PNG.
          
          Thank you for supporting me. ꒰⑅•ᴗ•⑅꒱
          

giyuu_228

@R4SP_B3RRY first of all thank you soo much . So in the png, like for the first
            arc it is only showing Akari's normal life, so is it possible for you keep everything
            same except the demon slayer uniform & the butterfly clip. Instead of the uniform
            can you like give her a kimono or yukata. And I think that there in no need for the
            butterfly clip in the story. For the second arc no need to change anything just
            remove the butterfly clip & shorten her hair length (for the hairstyle 1 will upload
            the reference pic in one chapter) & add one scar across the face from the left eye
            till the neck. For the haori could you make it like kanao pattern in the middle(her
            cape is on one side,so for akari could you make it in the middle) & add like silver
            stripes at the edges.(l will add the reference pic in the one chapter)
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giyuu_228

@R4SP_B3RRY hii! Thank you soo much ≧◡≦(to be honest I swear on god I was really concerned about you, because you didn't reply & idk why negative thoughts occupied me, I am glad that you doing great)
            Take care of yourself, so you will be available from 7 July right.  Well I also won't be available from 8 July till maybe 13 July. For the changes like I uploaded one chapter in the story which is like only for you. 
            Thank you soo much for doing this much for me. Like I don't have words to say how much I thank you.  ♡≧◡≦♡
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R4SP_B3RRY

@giyuu_228 Hellooo!!! I hope you’re doing wonderful too! :)))
            I’ll get right to the reading, and will provide feedback ((if needed)) as soon as I can :D
            Sorry for not replying for so long, I was caught up in a few things—
            For the png, I’m totally fine with updating it! I just need to know what I’m supposed to change :)
            However, I am going to be away July 1st-5th, so I sadly won’t be able to reply or work during that time period. If you tell me what to change in the png later today, I’ll probably have it ready by tomorrow, maybe latest Monday evening :)))
            Thank you for the opportunity!!! <333
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giyuu_228

Hii! (◍•ᴗ•◍)♥️
          How are you? Hope you're doing great. Can you please check out the new chapter ✦ 《 crimson shadow》 ✦ & tell me if there is any improvement needed. Also first I would like to thank you for helping me throughout this journey, I really am very thankful because you were the one who made Akari's png, which is one of the greatest thing. As my story is reaching it's second arc I would like a few changes in Akari's design.  Is it possible for you to add a few things. Sorry to disturb you 

giyuu_228

@R4SP_B3RRY  thank you soo much (◍•ᴗ•◍)♥️
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giyuu_228

@R4SP_B3RRY  first of all thank you soo much . So in the png, like for the first arc it is only showing Akari's normal life, so is it possible for you keep everything same except the demon slayer uniform & the butterfly clip. Instead of the uniform can you like give her a kimono or yukata. And I think that there in no need for the butterfly clip in the story. For the second arc no need to change anything just remove the butterfly clip & shorten her hair length (for the hairstyle I will upload the reference pic in one chapter) & add one scar across the face from the left eye till the neck. For the haori could you make it like kanao pattern in the middle(her cape is on one side,so for akari could you make it in the middle) & add like silver stripes at the edges.(I will add the reference pic in the one chapter)
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R4SP_B3RRY

@giyuu_228 Hiii!!! I’ll make sure to read it as soon as I can, and will get back to you regarding improvements. And sure, I don’t mind updating the png! What do you want to change? :)))
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giyuu_228

Hi ⸜( ˙˘˙)⸝
          One question,  when you first started writing how did your story get popular you could say, I mean my story barely has more than 250 views & only 20 votes T - T why? Is my story not good. How can my story get more views & comments T - T.

giyuu_228

@R4SP_B3RRY hi 
            (◍•ᴗ•◍)♥️
            Ohh OK I understand. Thank soo much≧◡≦. Hope you also have a great month ahead
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R4SP_B3RRY

@giyuu_228 Hiii again! And to answer your question, it’s mostly just patience. Since your story is so new and recent, it might take longer for other people to discover it. If you want for your story to appear more for potential readers, I suggest adding more tags— I usually add tags of characters that appear in the story, or will in the future, as well as tags like ‘Kny’/‘kimetsunoyaiba’/‘demon slayer’/‘Kny oc’… etc etc etc.
            Also, maybe sure to add ‘KNY STORY’ and/or ‘KNYOC’ to your title! That’s basically how to bring in your intended audience, and get the right people interested.
            Other than that, just wait it out! Be patient, since no story gets famous overnight, so take your time :)))
            Hope my answer helped you, and wishing you a great rest of the month :D
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giyuu_228

Hi ≧◡≦
          How are you? Hope you're doing great.
          Please check out the new chapter (Sibling bond 2) & tell me how it is?

giyuu_228

@R4SP_B3RRY  next time please try to tell me in the comments about the chapters as it will be easier for me to reply
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giyuu_228

@R4SP_B3RRY  I am available at any time today, tomorrow it would be a bit hard for me to stay available 
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giyuu_228

@R4SP_B3RRY thank you soo much ⸜( ˙˘˙)⸝
            
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giyuu_228

@R4SP_B3RRY hi  it's ok no problem I can understand very well I also have a lot of school work. Is it your png or the one which I asked, I deleted that message because I thought you were busy. It's ok take your time but do tell me how is the chapter. Hope you also have a great week  

giyuu_228

Hi  ♡´・ᴗ・`♡
          How are you? Hope you're doing great
          Can you please check out the new chapter ️ ️ & tell me how is it, if any improvement needed please tell me in the suggestions 
          

R4SP_B3RRY

@giyuu_228 Hii!!! Sorry I didn’t reply before- I swear school is dumping as much work on me as they can 
            And I’ll get right to it now— Hope you have a great day!
            (Also, I am currently working on the png)
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giyuu_228

@giyuu_228 please check out the new chapter (sibling bonds)
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