RossL1

what

ok did you follow  me ?

Thx for the follow =)

what is it abani2

what is that you want me to look at
          

Thankyou 4 giving me the advice!

Oh! And, you might want to look into doing something about the title i.e. either changing it (there is really nothing wrong with it if you can make it work) or making sure that your story and your 'description' are related and enticing enough that anyone who reads the 'description' first might be encouraged to go on further and read the book.

Now i understand y it was rated R lol

Hey I love ur story soo far so keep going!