Helllooo. I've written a new book and desperately need feedback on how it is. It's called The Dagger Of Crimsonia.
It'd mean a lot if you read it and gave me advice\feedback!!
Link: https://my.w.tt/2tEjQ2Gg9O
Kiriya : Iwas by uncle doc and he said I have Hdas =( much more bad... And I do feel like people play with me... I'm pissed and happy Ib switch 。。 bad!!!