SubhalaxmiMe

          	
          	So My First Bts Story Is Publish.. 
          	
          	So You Know  Please Read It.. 
          	
          	After Reading It Please Share Your Suggestions In The Comment Section.. 
          	
          	And If You Are Kind Enough Then Vote For It Too..
          	
          	
          	
          	
          	Opposite Personality Of Mine Hope You Like It.... 
          	But Still Please Read It..
          	
          	Book Name Is :- Love Is Magic

SubhalaxmiMe

          
          So My First Bts Story Is Publish.. 
          
          So You Know  Please Read It.. 
          
          After Reading It Please Share Your Suggestions In The Comment Section.. 
          
          And If You Are Kind Enough Then Vote For It Too..
          
          
          
          
          Opposite Personality Of Mine Hope You Like It.... 
          But Still Please Read It..
          
          Book Name Is :- Love Is Magic

ushasathnalli

You did great work dear, your story plot is so good, but I felt the lack is if you make the small paragraphs, it will attract the readers more and it will help them do inline comments, I just said what I felt, sorry, if I hurt you❤❤

SubhalaxmiMe

@ushasathnalli no you are right I will work on it and thnx for reading it....
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ushasathnalli

Hey there(✷‿✷)
          Tq for the following me(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤
          If you have time, plz check out my very first work, 
          If possible leave your suggestions, it means a lot to me, it will help me to mold myself, 
          If you read my story please  let me know your reviews without fail,
          Any feedbacks are appreciated,o
          Tq for reading my words with patience❤
          Have a good time(◕ᴗ◕✿)

SubhalaxmiMe

@ushasathnalli yup sure and best of luck for it ᐠ( ᐛ )ᐟ
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ushasathnalli

@SubhalaxmiMe I will do❣✨ once I finish with my exams
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SubhalaxmiMe

@ushasathnalli You are welcome
            And Sure I will read your story ✔
            And I hope you will read mine too coz I am also a new writer here and this is my first story too o(〃＾▽＾〃)o
            And thanku you for following me too..
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