The Co-pilot

Here's a short sneak peek for something I've been (trying) cooking up. Also, if you have anything to say about my writing style, PLEASE TELL ME, I JUST WANT TO GET BETTER--
          
          
          
          Old hotel in the Midwest, October 19th 2018...
          
          
          "Mom, wait!" The scared girl attempted to keep up with her mom.
          
          Alyssa hurried towards the stairs, "Grace! Come on, keep moving." While they rushed down the staircase, she repeatedly told Grace to keep moving and to hurry up. Meanwhile, Grace called her friend ins response to her mother's command. 
          
          Lucky for them, Asher picked up on the first attempt. "Grace? Hey, what's up?" he answered energetically. Well, he probably wasn't, he just seemed extremely joyful at all times. The sound of his soothing voice comforted her through the times her teenage self wouldn't want her parent to get involved in.
          
          "Hey, Ash? You okay?" Grace's paranoia got to her.
          
          He hesitated, "Um, yeah? Wait, wait, wait, are you okay? You sound on edge." Of course Asher would notice it. Still, he knew when he could make fun of her. And also when it was in fact serious.
          
          "I'm fine, thanks," she replied. The teen held a hand over the speaker as she turned to Alyssa. "Mom, he--"
          
          "Tell him to come pick us up, or send someone, just tell him it has to be as fast as possible."
          
          Asher asked from the speaker under Grace's hand, "Gracie? Hello?"
          
          "Um, M-Mom asks if you could come pick us up?"
          
          "Your mom? Why?" The boy was reasonably confused, just as Grace.
          
          "I-I dunno, the power went out and she said 'they're coming' and now she's got a gun--"
          
          "Hold up, she's got what? Uh, well, I'm on my way."
          
          
          
          What're y'all thinking this is based on?

Y'all know what day it is, right?
          
          It's Easter! But today is NOT about bunnies, eggs, or chocolate. Today is the day when our Lord Jesus Christ rose from the dead almost 2000 years ago! So celebrate y'all because he didn't do it for no reason.
          
          He gave his life to save us, he bore the sins we couldn't carry and even now in some of the darkest times for us humans, he is there for us and loves us so much that he did all of this, we reject him and he still stands at the door with open arms.
          
          Tbh, I think this should be New Years Eve instead of the actual one.
          
          "He is not here, for he has risen, as he said. Come, see the place where he lay."
          - Matthew 28:6
          
          God bless you my brothers and sisters!

To the six people who will see this:
          
          After Crossing Paths Season 1, I will try to publish new stories but on a lower scale. This one story about Camp Cretaceous may be my favorite child, however if you all wanna see some more I have a few options for you (This may affect the release time of this voted story and Crossing Paths):
          
          
          - Deception's Killswitch | Marvel Cinematic Universe X OC
          - Only One Idol | A K-Pop Demon Hunters X OC Story
          - A Stranger Things Fanfic (Name TBA)
          - A The Last of Us Fanfic (Name TBA)
          - Waymaker | A Jurassic Park: The Game X OC Story (A Crossing Paths Prequel)
          
          
          Please note that these stories will be turned to the light of Jesus, all in-universe sins and rejection that happens in them, WILL be turned into in-universe testimonies and godly teachings and messages. God bless you all! <3