Dead inside

@IcelyJohns  your welcome and thank you for following me aswell :)

thnx 4 following me

Hello People/Aliens/etc! I was just wondering if any of you could give me some criticism on my books as I'm not a very good writer but I would ,however, like to improve :)

So I did a few more really crap chapters on 'the darkness within' . I thought i might just say that. idk.