Hey my Freakies, so due to wanting to give you the best quality of a story and not just some half-assed wannabe book, I'm going to take Val down for revising. When I repost a chapter for Val, I'd advise you to re-read it completely, because no chapter will remain the same. I'm basically starting over. This happens sometimes with writers, just most of them finish the book and look over it before putting it out into the world *scratches my neck nervously* I'm just kind of an idiot for not doing that myself. Sorry for the inconvenience everyone. I hope you understand. Love always, Arch ;)