Hey :) Would you please read my story????
"Help Me Find My Body!"
When a tragic plane crash kills the love of her life, Sarah Lautrec tries to drive to the crash site. However, panic and chaos aren't great driving conditions to drive under. Her car drives off a bridge and plunges into a lake, sending her into a coma. Five months later, Sarah awakes in a hospital. She feels different, unusual. A man's voice softly whispers for her to open her eyes. When she does, he, later known as Delacriux is nowhere to be found. He is a voice inside of her mind. Why does it only haunt Sarah? What does it want? Sarah must now help this voice find its human body. One problem: someone has already reincarnated themselves within Delacriux's former body, and you'll never guess who it is!
I would appreciate any and all advice :)