Omg I’m so sorry I didn’t see this! But really thank you I’ll work to make my description better, actually create depth I feel like my writing has no real…like if I wrote a sad story it wouldn’t make people cry …I know it’s wrong to compare myself to other writers but I wanna have impact on my readers by the words that I put before though I wanted to let you know that I’m gonna introduce a newer version of myself in my books for now on a deeper reading level I feel like I’m not detailed enough which is probably because I’m not a prolonged chapter type of reader myself because I have adhd but it’s fine because I know what others like so I’m gonna go off of that again! Thankyou so much for supporting <3