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Feedback for His Mail Order Bride (Devon & Jessica)
          
          I honestly did not expect I would like this! I usually read arranged marriage story with Toxic relationship, but how they started is not like that. Or not that bad. Maybe because Devon is a greenflag. Also I like the Fl's personality, so strong and independent. Anyways this is an arrange marriage thing, started with a wife recruitment thru poster, Fl with two sisters, bad parents relationship, there's rape included and murder, also the ML had an ex girlfriend who he somehow liked before, but find frustrating now. That's the reason why he recruited a wife also. Ml also have a bad parents relationship. Actually too much drama, but it's still well written. Not too many misunderstanding, it's good!(⁠ ⁠◜⁠‿⁠◝⁠ ⁠)⁠♡

Hi there! (^-^)/
          
          I know you are wondering why I am writing on your board? 
          Please don't ignore this on a first look.
          (^人^)
          Just read this message.
          
          So, I am Axsen... And I am trying to get readers for my book "Should I Give Up?"
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/266013190-should-i-give-up
          
          It is complete meaning it will not be much spotlight. And so won’t get pushed up in your suggestions. Hence, I am trying my way of promoting my book.
          
          Here you are free to not care about this message. But if you care, please do check it out. If not now, you can read it sometime later. You can discontinue reading if you are not thrilled by it. 
          
          Nonetheless if you end up liking it, please do vote on each and every chapter possible. 
          If you found it amusing share it with your friends. 
          
          Also, you can share your views via comments <3
          
          (づ ◕‿◕ )づ

Feedback for Lilah (Grey & Lilah)
          
          I've read this before like a year ago, since I've forgotten most of the scenes. It seems like I've read it for a first time again. This is about Mafias, innocent librarian girl, and a playboy male lead (used to be) but he has never been a relationship before her. He's a green flag tho, this is what I like about it. But the first few chapters, he's not. Well it's as expected to stories with dominant, arrogant leads to start up that way, but I love the character development of Grey. Also, it's a story with abusive content. I feel bad that Lilah grew up with that kind of environment and still remains forgiving. This is what I find frustrating about kind female leads. Still, it never fails to amazed how well writen it is. I'll probably put it on my bottom list since I still liked it a lot.

Feedback for Deeper (Vaughn & Melanie)
          
          Actually I didn't expect this story will stir too many emotions from me. It's a story about college sweethearts, brother's best friend, and sad past. Vaughn had a past lover for 2 years who he loves so much who cheated on him. It's the storm that caused havoc on him and Mels relationship. Tho I don't really like this kind of trope but I still want to continue reading and see how it will turn out. There's so many misunderstanding, what I hate is he cheated on Melanie as well but there's a reason behind that. I don't tolerate cheating tho but what I like about this is how it is well written, how every scenes/chapter lefts you craving for more. I was somehow pissed at Melanie's character at first but there's character development, to both of them. It's a great story, turned out that I'll like it. I just don't like that there's cheating involved and there's too many miscommunication, rather hurt the other that communicate. But still it's well written, I love that it's balanced, she did not easily forgive him and he tried his best to earn her trust again.

Feedback for Lowkey (Arabella & Roman)
          
          Another well written story of the same author of Julius. The story is so beautiful, loving the characters throughout their journey together. It's badassgirlxbadassboy, mafia, killings, twins, met in a mission and detailed smut thing. I love the progress of the story tho, what I don't like was the rush ending? There's a bonus chapter but the proposal was not properly shown I mean, it was just written there that he proposed and that's it and got a kid, I don't like the sudden time jump like 4 years later and I don't know the details of proposal and when she announced she's pregnant I want to witness his reaction, sigh. It just seems rushed, I'm kinda dissatisfied with the ending. But the story is great. I will still definitely reread it again.ෆ⁠╹⁠ ⁠.̮⁠ ⁠╹⁠ෆ

I can now comment to any post. I just uninstalled and installed my Wattpad. It was hard for me not jump to epilogues and ask for feedbacks before reading it. Been a week reading books that is not my cup of tea and it's frustrating. Kinda left bitter taste, traumatizing sigh. I have to force myself to finish it or else I'd be overthinking. Anyways everything's good now. Back to book hunting! (⁠´⁠∩⁠｡⁠•⁠ ⁠ᵕ⁠ ⁠•⁠｡⁠∩⁠`⁠) Following people with good reading lists btw!

Feedback for sweet innocence.
          
          It's a good book and it's well written. It is somehow about religious beliefs. I'm not into badgirlxgoodboy (Alessio & Honey) stories tho but this one somehow passed, but only because I love the ml. Alessio's one of the greenest flag ml. However, what I hate about this is the FLC, I sometimes feel bad for the ml sigh, always the one making the effort, tho I understand this is how her character is portrayed. It just pained me to see that she'd rather spend months alone for her own selfish reason, instead of communicating it with the ML. It hurts on the ml part to be just left without closure, not understanding what he did wrong to be left just like that. I just hope that part could not be that harsh, tho it's still a good story and it ended well with her new family.

I havee decided to drop my feedbacks here on every stories I read from now on. So I won't forget what really happened and if it's worth rereading.><

Before I could forget, I've put new story on my top list. Although the story of Light in your eyes by Anya_Jayvn have an open ending, I still find the story and writing beautiful! However, I don't like that it seems like it's unfinished? We never met the mlc's brother who he treasured, and there seems to be missing I don't understand! It's a short story, my first time reading a story here in wp with open ending so I was kinda disappointed. I can't stop overthinking what would happen next. This note is just like a reminder not to read it again until there's a sequel. Anyways, this must be the consequences of me reading immediately without asking for feedbacks first. This is not me at all, I usually left comments on the epilogue of the story before reading it. Sigh

https://www.wattpad.com/list/1697550795?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading_list&wp_page=reading_list_details&wp_uname=Aimujk261
          Check out this reading list hopefully you'll like these stories ☺️.