dayanyA555
Hey I really like your Edward book but I feel like it would be better if you take it’s slow it feel like it is being rushed. You should also decried the settings better like go into details. It’s a really good book but I feel like if you would have do this it would be a lot better. Of course you don’t have too
Grvciees
Heyy! Yeah I totally agree! I logged out of this account a while back for no reason and made this one, I have a new Edward Fan fic on here that I’m really proud of! If you have time maybe you could check it out? It’s way better than the My Forever one as I describe how the OC is feeling and what she sees around her :3