snikarma

You should make the vamp dude give the girl food when she wakes up and slowly gain her trust. he should loose his temp a lot because she's shy and slow she should be able to walk around freely and one of the vamps in his house should try to attack her cause she's still injured and he should save her. Making her realise how he really feels. And she should try to be carful around him. (Love the story so far) you don't have to take my suggestions. I couldn't think of many sorry.

roseadell02

@snikarma Thanks for the ideas. I'm probably going to use them. And thanks for saying you love my story. It means a lot to me
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