ssantokki21

Sheez.
          	I shouldn't write that.
          	I shouldn't said it to harsh. 
          	Did I too harsh??
          	SHEEZ!!!
          	
          	It's her decision for God sake!!
          	I feel so stupid. 
          	(/ー ̄;)

ssantokki21

Sorry for everyone, sometimes I'll be this freaking nuts so I bursted out here. I've got no other place to freely bursted like here. My other social network, couldn't help at all coz of some stuffs.
          so yeah.. Sorry for bothering you guys..
          
          and, as what I thought, I just can't write stories, cause.. Many things, I couldn't explain...
          yeah.. I'm sorry again.
          
          Thanks for your understanding..

ssantokki21

There are these people that never appriciate things you've done.
          Just a little bit praise..
          or, just..
          if you don't like it at all..
          no public offense.
          I've tried.
          We've tried so hard.
          I know that without "your help"
          our theatre would never be there.
          Never be as shine as today.
          But...
          sometimes..
          ahhh...
          I know you also tired.
          We are also tired.
          So, please, we're feeling the same in the different kind of situation.
          So.. Please..
          Beware of your words, buddy.

therealestpotato

Thank you for the votes!  ^-^

ssantokki21

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@Anime_Geek hey, again! really? you're welcome... ^^
            So you intentionally did it? ahahaha... well, it's fine then. if you want to make the story like what it is now, so just let it be like how it is now. I've never wanted you to change things you've written.
            But, if you want to know, I was thought that would be much more drama, or those tantrums over their feelings towards each other, before finally one party (I was thought Sandy in this case) would just denied it or accepted it. well, yeah, too much drama, maybe... ahahaha
            by the way, since I read the first chapter, I was thought that you would kill Cassy in the end, and the rest would be an over flowing tears.
            but you just make it more cute and lovely~ gaaaahhh~ I'm like a silly fangirl here, sorry.. (-_-")a
            
            More than pleasure to give you the prize! ^^
            
            I think I'll read your other book from now on..
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therealestpotato

I am speechless. Thank you for giving a long review on my story. Typing is a lot of work, I know. At least, for someone as lazy as me. xD I'm really glad you liked how I made my story just simple and cute but really runs deep in the heart. ^-^ And I know what you mean about the 'Under the tree' scene. I'm guilty because I rushed it intentionaly. I don't know what to do though. :/ Can you tell me what to add? I'd like a suggestion! :)
            Btw, I thank you for the cuteness overload prize. Haha. I'm honored to receive it from you. ^-^
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ssantokki21

@Anime_Geek my pleasure! Beside, I have no reason for not give my vote to this story. It's really cute. Naturally cute.
            and I like the way you put the things, all of the events between Cassy and Sandy, they were all fit prefectly in 15 days.
            the one I like the most is the sick moment, it is so so so terribly cute. How Sandy just gave those simple affection towards Cassy, said that's all because of her fever. *all hail fever*
            well, actually, it kinda reminds me a bit of myself too, becoming very needy for affection when I get sick. (everyone do the same, I think... don't they?)
            
            sorry, for this long shot..
            Just a little bit more, I promise. *crossing fingers behind*
            I also really like those tantrums, silly fights, chit-chats between Cassy and Sandy. Especially when it came from the very unmature grown woman Cassidy. Annoyingly cute!
            and the other characters, Jaz, Julian, Cassy's family, Sandy's family, Mr.Green, Jake, I also love them, their part, you put them simple and reasonable.
            
            but the last part in the day 15, the under the tree scene.. umm... A little bit.. Umm.. I don't know, for me, there's something kinda missing.
            When Sandy didn't know what to do and suddenly Cassy just strode off.. umm.. a little to fast for my liking..
            But, I like Sandy last line nontheless.
            
            All over, I love this cute story of you.
            (the conclusion and epilogue.. thumbs up! I give you honor to receive the cuteness overloading prize)
            Thanks a bunch! ^^
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ssantokki21

Ah, so this is how it feels like.
          Gaaahh~
          I really really like you, you know.
          But.
          But..
          But...
          
          I'm just this small freckle.
          Flying through a small crack on the wall, trying to reach you a soft warm burning sun.
          
          As in this world we're struggling now,
          I am one of them, the crowd.
          And you...
          You..
          You are the spotlight.

ssantokki21

Hey hey hey~ don't be confuse everybody!
            It is nothing, well... Not a nothing, but,
            it's more like a sneek-a-peek..
            Lately, I've been thinking to write a story.
            Yeah, I'm not sure yet but if I can resume my write, the story will come in just like those I wrote some minutes ago.
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1000natsu

Santokki-san!!! Im a fan of kojiyuu alsoo kyaaaaayyy X3 yukisae are good too X3 and atsumina OuO hehe~

ssantokki21

@SummerChii waaa.. glad to know that!
            
            kyaaaa~~ yukisae, atsumina, I like them too!! >///<
            
            tadinya aku ngikutin AKB, tp waktu Yuko lulus,
            udah jarang banget ngikutin & skrg jadi ngikutin SCANDAL lg deh.. ehhehee...
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