Lily Siri Potter DISCONTINUED REWRITING ON NEW ACCOUNT

first year-5 *edited*

when lily woke up the first thing she noticed was she was in the same bed as last time " thanks poppy " " for what miss evans " " im in my bed " " yes you are miss evans but it would be nice if you stopped coming " " nah you love me too much " lily had only just noticed professor McGonagall and snape by her bed " oh hello fessors " " morning miss evans " McGonagall gave her a small smile " how long was i out " " not long miss evans it's nearly dinner time  " madam pomfrey told the red head "oh ok thank you " lily went to get off the bed but was stopped " sorry miss evans but you need to take this potions " " ok can i just go the toilet first " " no miss evans you will leave and not come back " " no no i was gonna come back" the matron gave her a stern look " fine i was gonna leave "lily took the potions and gulped them all down " you can go " the matron told her lily didn't move " i will leave if i get some chocolate please " " no its nearly dinner "  " miss evans before you leave we have to ask you something " snape informed her " oh ok can i just tell you dont listen to fred and george their liars they were the ones who threw Mrs Norris to the giant squid i only distracted the centaurs  " " its not about that miss evans though we will talk about that  " he informed her " who do you live with " lily didn't know what to say " my parents " she told them it wasnt all a lie

a/n ok im going to skip to where they are trying to save the stone because first year was only meant to be a introduction to lily  

they had all just got past the chess  ron was unconscious hermione stayed with ron and let lily and harry go they walked into the room harry expected to see snape but saw " i told you it wasn't snape " " Quirrell  " lily's scar started to hurt "harry it hurts " " what hurts " but before she could answer she passed out 

lily woke in the hospital wing same bed harry had already woken up and him hermione and ron sat around lily's bed " hey guys " " hi lily madam pomfrey said when you wake up you could leave it's the end of year feast  "

at the feast 

in fourth place gryffindor with 312 points third place Hufflepuff 352 second place ravenclaw 426 and first place slytherin 472 the slytherin table broke out in cheers " yes yes well done slytherin however due to recent events "                                                           "i have a few last minute points to Ronald weasley for the best game of chess hogwarts has seen in many years 50 points and hermione granger for the use of cool logic in the face of fire i award you 50 points mr harry potter for pure nerve and outstanding courage i award you also 50 points "                                                              " to miss lily evans for going through pain and sticking with friends to help them through anything i award you 60 points " even slytherins started clapping as lily got along with most people in that house banners started changing to gryffindor 

for most of the train ride home lily slept still tired from the previous events the train came to a stop " promise you will all write " hermione asked the other three " well i promise " lily hugged her best friend then harry and ron " i have to leave but i will promise to try see you all " the red head told the trio