Lily Siri Potter DISCONTINUED REWRITING ON NEW ACCOUNT

first year- 4 *edited*

lily was sitting in charms with ron and hermione next to lily she was partners with draco "wingardium leviosa  " ron shouted "your saying it wrong ron " lily told him "its wing-gar-dium Levi-o-sa make the gar long " hermione told him " how about you two do it if your so clever " hermione and lily gave each other a look at the same time " wingardium leviosa " both of there feathers started rising " oh well done miss evans miss granger "

after class lily and hermione spotted the boys and started walking towards them " no wonder no one can stand them there nightmares and lily is worse  being friends with slytherins " i stormed past them with hermione and heard harry " i think they heard you " hermione and lily didnt show up to any of their next classes harry and ron were running to the girls bathroom after hearing from someone thats were they were afraid the troll had already got to them 

they reached the bathroom and saw hermione not even regesting that lily wasn't there "use your wand ron " hermione shouted "wingardium leviosa  "the trolls bat rose into the air then dropped on it's head hermione was the first to speak up "is it dead " "no its just been knocked out " harry told her McGonagall burst in the bathroom snape and Quirrell following behind  "what on earth were you three thinking " the professor shouted the voice cold with fury "please professor they were looking for me " "miss granger " " i thought i could handle the troll on my own because I've read all about them if they hadn't found me i would be dead by now   "  

" well in that case miss granger five points from gryffindor but five points to you two not many first years can take on a troll and live to tell the tale " "also where is miss evans " all three gryffindor looked at each other " well " it was snape this time " we dont know she wasn't at the feast sir " the raven hair boy  spoke up 

  all professors started searching the castle in a panic professor snape was worried the most as he was afraid he had failed his child hood best friend again all the professors were together still trying to find the girl  " she couldn't have gone far " McGonagall cried " maybe the forbidden forest  " snape added " lets check we will ask hagrid " Dumbledore told them so thats how most of the teachers were walking around the grounds out side at night they walked past a tree by the black lake to see a baby doe curled up snape and McGonagall recognized it as the doe that was running around the school professor snape picked her up " i've found miss evans  " all the teachers looked at the baby doe in the professors arms and could see he cared for the student the took her to the hospital wing and used a spell to transform her back the girls lips were blue and she was ghostly pale " oh my she must of been out for hours " cried madam pomfrey  the professors looked at the sleeping girl in worry as to what had mad her stay outside and get that cold 

lily woke up confused in the hospital wing she only remembered being outside professor snape sat beside her bed " sir what happened " snape looked up in surprise he didn't see her wake up "i found you outside "  "   i have to go good bye miss evans "

" your free to leave miss evans " " yes thanks poppy no doubt im going to see you soon " " just like you father "

" lily siri evans were have you been " hermione's voice could be heard through out the common room " hermione my best friend love of my life how are you " lily acted like herself but inside she was scared " where were you " " out on a walk ? " it was more like a question " i will let it slide this once " they were all sitting at breakfast when harry blurted out " lily who are your parents you never said anything about your family " " their dead " "oh sorry " they stopped talking about it and headed to class 

as they entered  november the weather got terrible it was saturday  and today was harrys and lily's first quidditch match " just eat something mate " ron tried to persuade harry " i dont want anything " "just a bit of toast harry " encouraged hermione "im not hungry " " lily has no problem eating " lily didnt pay attention she was to busy eating and throwing food at people the twins had now took away her food and lily dumped syrup on there head so all three were wrestling on the floor with lee Jordan  cheering on harry ron hermione sat watching the three. Teachers told them to stop they didn't listen until McGonagall came over  " evans weasleys dont hide from me what have i told you about fighting .  " 

 in the changing rooms wood started his speech " ok men " " and women " Angelina  johnson butted in " and women this is it -" " the big one " fred said " the one we've all been waiting for " george finished " we know olivers speech by heart " fred told harry and lily  " we were in the team last year " "shut up you two this is the best team gryffindors  had in years were going to win i know it" 

" now i want a nice fair game captains shake hands " it looked as if wood and flint wanted to break each others hands " now mount your brooms " 

the commentator was lee jordan  lily fred and george friend " and there off the quaffle is taken by lily evans she is one fit girl and can i say she is one flirt watch out professors "

" JORDAN i can take this off you " " sorry professor lily passes it to alicia who passes it to angalina slytherin grab the quaffle wait - its back to lily  AND THEY SCORE YES LILY  "

" slytherin have the quaffle flint passes to pucey but just misses a bludger drops the quaffle lily evans catches it "  slytherins beater whacks a bludger at lily who gets hit in the leg she hears a crack but ignores the pain she wanted to win the game   " foul foul slytherin scum " lily had spotted hagrid in the stands by hermione and ron lily scored another 10 points then angelina scored slytherin were playing dirty lily's leg felt much worse gryffindors were at 20 to 70 harrys broom then started going crazy lily could see hermione go up to the teachers box then harrys broom stopped he had flew around when the snitch flew in front of him harry began chasing it he had fallen on the ground " is he going to throw up " lily shouted to the twins  they shrugged harry had the snitch in his hand " harry potter has caught the snitch 170 points to gryffindor " lee shouted lily hopped of her broom and felt dizzy while everyone else went to congratulate harry lily was seeing black dots she looked down to see blood running down her leg the last thing she saw saw before she passed out was professor snape running towards her