Lily Siri Potter DISCONTINUED REWRITING ON NEW ACCOUNT

first year -2 *edited*

"cheer up "said ron "snapes always taking points off fred and george can i come and meet hagrid with you " "can i come as well harry " lily said giving the small boy a smile at five the four of them left hagrid lived in a small wooden house at the edge of the forbidden forest when harry knocked we could here shuffling and barking 'back fang back ' hagrids face appeared "hang on  back fang " we all stepped into hagrids hut "make ye selves at home "hagrid said while he let go of fang hagrid hadn't seen lily yet as she was the smallest and behind everyone that was until fang jumped on lily hagrid looked at the girl and froze like every other teacher did when they saw the girl "lily "hagrid whispered but they all heard " hello sir im lily evans " she held out her hand but hagrid hugged her " im sorry you look like someone i used to know " "its fine i dont mind "  "weren't you that girl i saw with the weasley twins going into the forbidden forest the one who was being carried " hagrid asked a smile coming to his face " erm maybe " everyone gave her a look so she gave in " fine yes it was me but in my defense fred dared me to ride the stag " all them sat there in aw that a girl that size would do something like that "you didnt know i did that did you " "no " hagrid chuckled harry sat there and told hagrid all about snapes lesson " but he seemed to hate me " harry complained "rubbish why should he " "he liked lily " hermione added lily looked at him to see him reading the daily prophet about Gringotts break in  

the next day they had flying lessons which lily couldnt wait for as remmy never let her on her broom madam hooch arrived and had them all stand by a broom "stick your hand over the broom and say up " hooch ordered 'up ' was heard on the first go lily got her broom as did draco and harry " now when i blow my whistle kick off from the ground hard keep your brooms steady rise a few feet and come back down on my  whistle three two " but Neville had shot off "come back boy" wham  everyone heard a nasty crack and neville was laying face down on the ground 'broken wrist ' she muttered "none of you move while i take this boy to the hospital wing you leave those brooms where they are or you'll be out of hogwarts before you can say quidditch  " not long after she left draco burst out laughing along with other Slytherins "did you see his face the great lump " "shut up draco " lily shouted at him not bothered if they were friends she was also friends with neville " ooh sticking up for longbottom " said pansy Parkinson a pug faced slytherin "never thought you would like a fat little cry baby evans " draco caught everyones attention " look its that stupid thing longbottoms gran sent him  "  "give it here Malfoy " harry held out his hand "actually i think i will leave it somewhere for longbottom to find how about up a tree " " give it here " harry yelled "come get it potter " yelled malfoy up in the air on his broom lily and harry both grabbed their brooms "no" hermione shout they ignored her getting up in the air anyway draco threw the rememberal lily caught throwing to harry who was about 20 feet away harry caught it " HARRY POTTER LILY EVANS " both harry and lily flew down walking over to the professor " minnie it was all harrys fault " "hey its not its malfoys " "oi toe rag it was you who had to play hero " they kept arguing while walking they reminded the professor so much of the late lily and james potter they got to a class room the two still arguing while professor got oliver wood by the time she came back with the boy lily and harry were wrestling on the floor they froze when they saw professor McGonagall "its your fault lily " harry shoved her standing up "dont blame me you toe rag " lily got harry into a head lock "enough potter evans " the professor shouted while she pinched the bridge of her nose " wood this is your new seeker and chaser " lily perked up wile she heard this  " really like your not pissing me about im going to be a chaser" lily had heard about quidditch all from the twins she had played once or twice "language miss evans " oh how this girl was so much like he father "sorry minnie " the professor rolled her eyes 

later on in the common room lily fred george all sat there planning a prank the twins had just shown her the marauders map they had been planning this prank for weeks and were going to do it tomorrow  at breakfast 

the next morning a banner dropped saying marauders 2.0  all students turned red and gold teachers hair turned bright pink "mr weasley mr weasley miss evans " "minnie sweet minnie it was them two " "no it wasn't "the twins shouted all three started wrestling it took professor snape and McGonagall to split them up snape had hold of the girl "oh thank you professor you saved me " she fake cried but to everyone but the twins it seemed real "dont believe her she's lying " lily just flipped them off "miss evans " McGonagall warned "detention my office 6 pm " " its a date minnie " lily flirted blowing a kiss the twins watched in amusement how this sweet looking girl was really evil "professor snape me you Friday" "no miss evans "