Lily Siri Potter DISCONTINUED REWRITING ON NEW ACCOUNT

first year-3 *edited*

lily was sitting with the twins when her owl paddy dropped of a parcel "open it lily" they all ripped off the wrapping to reveal a nimbus 2000 lily looked down to see harry had one on the teachers table professor snape sat there stroking paddy as seven o'clock drew nearer harry and lily met up they both raced down to the quidditch pitch they mounted there brooms and started circling the pitch "hey potter evans come down " wood shouted below them he was carrying a large wooden crate harry and lily landed next to him " very nice i see what McGonagall meant you both are natural today im just teaching you the rules " "then you will join  team practice three times a week  " harry and lily nodded along "right quidditch is easy enough to understand even if its not easy to play there are seven players on each side three chasers  thats you lily " wood took out the quaffle "this ball is called a quaffle the chasers throw it to each other and try get it through one of the hoops to score a goal ten points every time a quaffle gets through a hoop follow me " wood instructed us " so the chasers throw the quaffle through a hoop to score " harry repeated "so its sort of like basketball on a broom but with six hoops  " " what's basketball ? " wood asked curious  "it's a  muggle sport " lily told him " yeah it is " harry gave her a small smile lily and harry had formed a sibling bond "now there's another player on each team called the keeper thats me " " i have to fly around the hoops to stop the other team scoring " " what's  that " harry asked pointing to a bludger  "i'll show you now" he handed lily the beaters bat "im going to show you what the bludgers do"  pointing to them " i'd stand back harry " lily warned him knowing what would happen if he didn't oliver let one of them go it rose in the air then went for lily she swung the bat at it hitting it across the pitch it then came for oliver who caught it and shoved it back in the case wood then got out the snitch harry stared in awe " now this is what your after the snitch it may look nice but its nasty to catch the game only finishes once this is caught its worth 150 points "

with lily doing pranks and quidditch practice she was busy a lot of the time it was lunch time where most people were in the great hall  fred george were chasing lily she was in her animagus form she ran along the corridors  as a doe people turned around to look at her run around people were confused as to why there was a doe running around lily ran over to the professors had come to see what all the loud noise was saw fred and george looking around for her " has anyone seen a doe " george asked the professors "now mr weasley why is a doe in the castle " professor McGonagall questioned " idk running from filch or prank slytherins or maybe it stole all our chocolate then blamed professor Dumbledore   " fred ranted " fred i've spotted lily flower" george shouted  the doe started running "fred grab her shoot i meant it " the doe started running again and ran towards the professors  "mr Weasleys what are you doing  " professor McGonagall shouted "she ate chocolates doe cant eat chocolate" both twins shouted "is this a student mr weasley "  "no " both fred and george said  the doe then goes up to professor snape and nudge him he pats her head and picks her up " so what is this doe doing in the castle" snape asked he could recognise those green eyes anywhere " miss evans please change back " snape put her down and she changed back " hi professors " she grinned at the teachers they both rolled their eyes " let me guess detention 5 pm dungeons cant remember our last meet up sir " she gave professor snape a smile " correct miss evans  " can't wait sev " the professor froze at the nickname the same one her mother gave her " just like your parents" lily heard him mutter 

hi sorry this is only a short chapter just wanted to go asleep by this point