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At The Hall
"Hold me off? Good luck" says Atari sarcastically as he makes some hand signs and shouts "Cloud Style : Cloud Tiger Jutsu" and a Cloud Tiger ran at them.
Konohamaru responded by making some hand signs and shouting "Fire Style: Fireball Jutsu".
Then Moegi made a huge amount of hand signs and shouts "Water Style : Water Dragon Jutsu" and the Water from the pond outside smashes through the window and joins Konohamaru's Fireball and the Jutsu spiral and then the three Jutsu cancelled each other but Moegi collapses from the strain on her chakra reserves, Udon caught her and held her up and looked at Konohamaru with a worried face.
"I have to keep her safe I can't help, how are we gonna get out of this alive?" asks Udon worried tone.
"Don't worry I'll never let my comrades die" says Konohamaru and turned to face Atari.
"Konohamaru, kick his ass" shouts Udon.
Konohamaru turned around gave him a thumbs up and said "Got it!"
"What a touching little scene you just had there but that's impossible, you're just a fresh Genin" says Atari.
"Shut up! I'll kick your ass" shouts Konohamaru.
"I have the Cloud Release Kekkei Tota, what do you have that'll allow you to do that?" asks Atari sarcastically.
"You'll see dumb ass" says Konohamaru charging at Atari.
"Why you little" says Atari while charging at Konohamaru. Atari slashes his Kunai and Konohamaru dodges to the left slashes at Atari's gut but Atari grabs Konohamaru's hand and drives his knee into his gut and Konohamaru collapses to the floor and Atari says "Told you can't beat me".
But as Atari walks towards Udon and Moegi he feels a hand on his leg and Konohamaru says "Wait I'm not done yet you bastard, I'll never let my comrades die so just give up" weakly to which Atari kicks his hand away and turns to Udon and Moegi again but Konohamaru gets up and says "Hey don't you walk away from me, come over here to get your ass kicked bastard" to which Atari sighs deeply and walks to him.
"If you were so eager to die, you should have just told me" says Atari while walking.
Konohamaru makes some hand signs and shouts "Fire Style : Fireball Jutsu" and a Fireball races towards Atari.
Atari sighs, makes some hand signs and says "Cloud Style : Cloud Barrier" making a very weak but strong enough barrier that cancelled out the Fireball but crumbled after and quickly leaving a layer of cool cloudy mist and says "You're Pathetic".
Konohamaru then thinks back to his talk with his Uncle Asuma right before the Genin Exams;
"'Konohamaru what do you want to be when you grow up?" asks Asuma.
"The Seventh Hokage!" proclaims Konohamaru proudly.
"Seventh, not Sixth?" asks Asuma.
"Naruto-Onichan's gonna be the Sixth" says Konohamaru.
"Oh okay, but why do you want to be the Hokage?" asks Asuma.
"So that people will recognize me as Konohamaru Sarutobi!" replies Konohamaru.
"That's all well and good but there should be another reason for that dream and once you realize it I believe you'll be ready to start on the road to becoming a great Hokage, do you know what that reason is?" asks Asuma.
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