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The Gates Of Konoha
"We're at our time limit" says Shikamaru.
"Wait!" shouts Sakura as she gets to the gate and says "I want in, she's my best friend" and the conversation goes like in Canon until;
Alright, Kiba and Akamaru will lead the group tracking Sayuri's scent and using their familiarity with the terrain to spot booby traps. Both look straight ahead, I will follow behind Kiba, quickly providing orders as the situation calls for it. I also look ahead, but with a wider range than Kiba and Akamaru, Naruto would be behind me, ready to react to any threats with his Kage Bushin no Jutsu and will watch the left, Sakura will take position behind him to give support if needed, next is Chouji, you don't have much speed but your striking power is great for a decisive blow and will be handy in executing a ambush, Neji takes the rear, watching their backs and any other blind-spots in their formation using his Byakugan ..." says Shikamaru.
"Wow, nice planning" says Kiba.
"I wasn't finished" says Shikamaru and then he says "Kiba and Akamaru will look ahead, I will as well but to a wider range, Naruto will look to the left, Sakura will look underneath so they don't try anything sneaky, Chouji to the left and Neji will look behind and again will, cover all our blind spots".
"Naruto, I want you to make a once in a life time promise to me" says Sakura.
"What is it?" asks Naruto.
"If I can't bring Sayuri-Chan back, promise me you will" says Sakura.
"I promise on my life" says Naruto thinking 'She really cares about her' and everything goes like in Canon except Sakura tags along until;
With Sayuri Retrieval Squad - In Earth Dome Prison
"What are we gonna do, Sayuri's getting away! ..." starts Naruto.
"I've got this" says Sakura as she black marks appear on Sakura's arm and she punches the wall of the dome form it to break but the hole quickly fills itself back in.
"It didn't work" says Naruto.
"That's just cause, I'm not putting my back into it" says Sakura as she accidently clicks her fingers while forming a fist when suddenly for second some kind of white energy appears but quickly fades away and she punches the wall one more time creating a huge hole but Jirobo quickly funnels his Chakra into healing the wall.
"That's not going to do it" says Jirobo and he thinks 'Damn Leaf Shinobi, at this rate I'll only be able to hold on for up to an hour' and then they use Shikamaru's plan and everything goes like in Canon until;
Naruto And Sakura Confront Kimimaro
Naruto and Sakura confront Kimimaro when the box next to Kimimaro explodes and Sayuri stands there in it's place, Curse Marks receding from Level 2 and Naruto laughs and says "Sayuri! What are you doing with these guy? Let's go home, Hey ... we're going home, everyone's worried about you, so ..." when Sayuri starts laughing like a maniac. "Sayuri! You can hear my voice, can't you" shouts Naruto and then she jumps to the trees and Naruto shouts "Wait Sayuri!"
But when Naruto tries to pursue Kimimaro blocks him and says "It's futile ... Die" as he is about to throw a bone at him when Sakura kicks Kimimaro throwing off his aim.
"Go Naruto!" shouts Sakura.
"Got it, I'll leave this to you Sakura-Chan" says Naruto and then says "Do what you can" says Naruto as he rushes off to stop Sayuri.
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